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Crepe Suzette

a prime example of ridiculous, over-the-top silliness, akin to Fibonacci in many ways, but having even fewer specific requirements; the number of syllables in every line must be a prime number, but no regard is given as to whether successive repeats are allowed. allowing for repeats means that all senryu, haikus are suzette primes, so you're a master of the form and were unaware. if you like them and I've rained on your parade, well then, here's an umbrella, or maybe a mushroom
2,3,5,7,11,13,17,19,3,...

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Date: 12/25/2022 2:51:00 PM
Cute!
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Date: 3/24/2022 2:23:00 PM
Creative and well crafted....I especially admired your "here's an umbrella or maybe a mushroom".
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Date: 3/24/2022 3:08:00 AM
This is gorgeously written and fabulously typed! Wow! Impressive Jeff!
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