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Creepy Crawlers

Summertime involves barbeques and picnics, baseball games, swimming, and dogs fetching sticks. Pitching tents and sharing the ground with slugs, centipedes, and other assorted bugs. As twilight wanes, female mosquitoes thirst for blood: vying for who will bite you first. And at sunset, as evening breezes warm, clouds of annoying gnats begin to swarm. Ebony fields showcase flashing fireflies, blinking in and out like sparks on the rise. As creepy crawlers stir in the moonlight, crickets break the silence imposed by Night. The morning mist dribbles droplets of dew on blades of grass that green grasshoppers chew. And as butterflies sip nectar, first light, dragonflies flex cellophane wings for flight. Summertime's menagerie of insects includes artists, farmers, and architects. Alive, yet as beautiful as a gem: we get to share this blue marble with them.
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Date: 1/21/2022 10:58:00 PM
Great imagery. Beautiful writing! Congratulations!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/22/2022 8:11:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/21/2022 11:16:00 AM
way to go, Emile. did you win in both contests? I see this on Brian's winner list. Big congrats to you. You are such a great poet.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/21/2022 12:47:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea, yes I was lucky enough to win in both contests. I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/20/2022 7:55:00 PM
I really love your entry that encompasses so many insects Emile. Wonderfully composed! Congratulations on your win! Blessings xxoo
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/21/2022 7:28:00 AM
Thanks, Connie, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/20/2022 7:25:00 PM
Such a beautiful verse, Emile, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/21/2022 12:45:00 PM
Thanks, Eve, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/20/2022 11:34:00 AM
Love this creepy write, Emile, love the rhyme especially. Congrats. Terry
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/20/2022 11:35:00 AM
Thanks, Terry, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/16/2022 3:48:00 PM
Such good writing, Emile. And, we must keep in mind that there are many, many more insects than people on our planet.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/16/2022 7:35:00 PM
Wonderful time. Shane and I drove to Mississippi to spend New Year's Eve with a service friend, then across Alabama to the Florida Panhandle. I played piano for my brother's service. On down through Florida, up to Savannah for a visit with a friend of Shane's and on home. Two weeks of pure relaxation! Thanks for asking. I've started the second book in your series! I am amazed at your prolificity (?)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/16/2022 3:53:00 PM
Thanks, Milt, I appreciate it, by the way, how did your vacation go? I hope you had a good time my friend, Emile.
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