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Creepy Crawlers

Summertime involves barbeques and picnics, baseball games, swimming, and dogs fetching sticks. Pitching tents and sharing the ground with slugs, centipedes, and other assorted bugs. As twilight wanes, female mosquitoes thirst for blood: vying for who will bite you first. And at sunset, as evening breezes warm, clouds of annoying gnats begin to swarm. Ebony fields showcase flashing fireflies, blinking in and out like sparks on the rise. As creepy crawlers stir in the moonlight, crickets break the silence imposed by Night. The morning mist dribbles droplets of dew on blades of grass that green grasshoppers chew. And as butterflies sip nectar, first light, dragonflies flex cellophane wings for flight. Summertime's menagerie of insects includes artists, farmers, and architects. Alive, yet as beautiful as a gem: we get to share this blue marble with them.
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Alex Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 10:58 PM
Great imagery. Beautiful writing! Congratulations!
Pinet Avatar
January 22, 2022 at 8:11 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Dietrich Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 11:16 AM
way to go, Emile. did you win in both contests? I see this on Brian's winner list. Big congrats to you. You are such a great poet.
Pinet Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 12:47 PM
Thanks, Andrea, yes I was lucky enough to win in both contests. I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 7:55 PM
I really love your entry that encompasses so many insects Emile. Wonderfully composed! Congratulations on your win! Blessings xxoo
Pinet Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 7:28 AM
Thanks, Connie, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Roper Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 7:25 PM
Such a beautiful verse, Emile, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Pinet Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 12:45 PM
Thanks, Eve, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Flood Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 11:34 AM
Love this creepy write, Emile, love the rhyme especially. Congrats. Terry
Pinet Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 11:35 AM
Thanks, Terry, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Hankins Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 3:48 PM
Such good writing, Emile. And, we must keep in mind that there are many, many more insects than people on our planet.
Hankins Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 7:35 PM
Wonderful time. Shane and I drove to Mississippi to spend New Year's Eve with a service friend, then across Alabama to the Florida Panhandle. I played piano for my brother's service. On down through Florida, up to Savannah for a visit with a friend of Shane's and on home. Two weeks of pure relaxation! Thanks for asking. I've started the second book in your series! I am amazed at your prolificity (?)
Pinet Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 3:53 PM
Thanks, Milt, I appreciate it, by the way, how did your vacation go? I hope you had a good time my friend, Emile.
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