Creepy

The night was deep I could not sleep
The body was hot and so were my clothes
 With my mind in a whirl, I stretched out my foot, when I felt a hand curl
Over it.

Every hair on my body began to rise, so did my eyes
In reflex I pulled my leg back inside, my heart pounding I nearly died 
With fright.

Mind racing, what should I do? Then the mattress from underneath moved too.
My body stiffened as it pushed up, then down
I felt a swelling in my throat and a scream tore from me into the dark.

Simultaneously I threw the covers back, tumbled and fell into the black
Then the laughing began, low and growling, my head was spinning 
I slammed into the door, then a body slid out from the floor 

And my kid brother was led there grinning.

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Date: 10/13/2023 4:21:00 PM
You mean Ex Little Brother.
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Janine Lever
Date: 10/14/2023 5:12:00 PM
ha ha ha yep. thanks for your comment. xx
Date: 10/11/2023 5:55:00 PM
Lol. Good one. Kid brothers do like to pull pranks.
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Janine Lever
Date: 10/14/2023 5:12:00 PM
They sure do. Although not as much now, he is 69. ha ha.xx
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