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Creatures Know True Love

Baby, every-time you try to avoid me A cute bird sings to make me calm A naughty cat tires to help me laugh A stupid dog barks to divert my mind!!! Baby, the creatures of all type feel my heart Love me the way I love you So creatures continue to have faith in true love!!!

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/26/2016 8:21:00 AM

Balbir,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 6/26/2016 8:06:00 AM

Balbir,, well done, thank you for sharing your thoughts through words. *skat*

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 6/26/2016 4:57:00 AM

Welcome! nice write :D

Manmath Dalei

Date: 6/26/2016 4:38:00 AM

Balbir, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead...........//:) hugs