Creative Undead

The street lights switch on & so does my head,
From my mind flows prose, compose, no time for bed.
Who knows if those thoughts are chose to come again,
No time to doze, put on some clothes & grab yourself a pen.

The dawn breaks & so does my stride,
Thoughts turn to dust in my mind,
Another artistic vampire, the creative undead,
Time to return to my coffin, my bed.

Here lies the great day sleeper,
Known to few, respected by none, most thought him daft,
His heart burnt bright with the love of his craft,
Fueled by the fires of passion & drive,
Doused with a lack of any real substance.

R.I.P.
Redemption In Poetry.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/3/2011 5:23:00 AM
wellyou have rhymes here ;) if you like it dark try Raven's Plight..Light & Love Day Sleeper
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Date: 3/6/2010 1:56:00 PM
Enjoyed reading just about all your poems .I really like this one the most. Deep, great expression do you work at night. Sleep all day. Anyways I love the vampire world you live in.....
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Date: 1/24/2010 1:34:00 PM
Very nice...enjoyed reading this afternoon...Marty
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Date: 1/23/2010 4:32:00 PM
Hey I just now made you one of my fave poets cause i think your an awesome poet so please keep writing. =)
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Date: 1/23/2010 4:28:00 PM
Hey get on the chat!!!!! I sent you soupmail too!
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Date: 1/22/2010 9:34:00 PM
R.I. P. So fun to use that at the end of your poem. haha. WEll, YOU, sir, are certainly the "undead" when it comes to creativity. Keep on with those pastel dreams!! Andrea
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Date: 1/22/2010 10:54:00 AM
Wow. This is SICK!!! In a good way LOL!!! I love this souper poem!! Lol. cause it's poetrySOUP.com
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Date: 1/22/2010 10:33:00 AM
:D This is a wicked poem!! I love it! The detail is excellent and it has an easy flow to it. -Echo
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Date: 1/22/2010 10:27:00 AM
I like this, nice work. xo R.E.C.K ~Rain Essence Cerdwin Keetly
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