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Creative Layouts

~ ~ ~ [ ||||| ] [ ||||| ] My Quaint Cottage The quaintness of my cottage Is idyllic in my sweet resting thoughts. My miniature garden rarely noticed by one Is garlanded with fenced shrubs and flowery visions. My orange clustered tree Showers } { its love onto my } { cascade of verses } { as I rest against } { its sturdy bark on } {a silent day My green walled cottage is sewn intricately with ivy Leaving an Arched door Open Fringed With fresh roses Attracting the Honey suckles Hanging in air Fluttering Their wings For ## but # one ## sip In ## my ##### garden Of # b# l #o # o # m # s FIRST Balveen Cheema October 24, 2015 Judged Contest: Creative Layouts Sponsor: Broken Wings

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Bill Lindsay

Date: 10/28/2015 10:51:00 AM

~A lovely piece, well done!

Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/28/2015 11:04:00 AM

Thanks dor your appreciation, Bill!

Skat A

Date: 10/27/2015 9:36:00 PM

Balveen, Wonderful win. SKAT

Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/28/2015 11:05:00 AM

I'm glad you consider it so, Skat! Love, Balveen

Sneha Rv

Date: 10/26/2015 10:49:00 PM

This is so so lovely!! Congrats on your wonderful win!! :D :D

Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/26/2015 10:52:00 PM

Thanks Sneha! That's my cottage! Love, Balveen

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/26/2015 7:44:00 AM

Balveen, how creative and beautiful your poem is. Congratulations on your wonderful deserving first place win!

Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/26/2015 8:41:00 AM

Thanks Connie!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/26/2015 12:56:00 AM

Congrats on ur superb first place win with this creative layout n wonderful poetry Balveen!

Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/26/2015 8:42:00 AM

Upma, thank you so much!

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/25/2015 7:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your 1st Place win for your very creative layout and wonderful poem. Hugs, Sandra

Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/26/2015 8:43:00 AM

Sandra dear, thanks for your appreciation! Love, Balveen

James Inman

Date: 10/25/2015 4:57:00 PM

So impressive Balveen. Great poem and layout.

Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/26/2015 8:43:00 AM

Thanks James!

Dan Cwiak

Date: 10/25/2015 3:08:00 PM

Great write and very creative in layout, Balveen. Kudos to you on this winner.

Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/26/2015 8:45:00 AM

I'm so glad you liked it Dan! Thanks!

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/25/2015 1:25:00 PM

Balveen, congratulations on your 1 st place win:-) Alexis

Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/27/2015 9:35:00 AM

Alexis, when a sponsor asks to post a poem online, does it mean we have to post it elsewhere other than submitting for a contest? Kindly assist. I'm still quite ignorant and confused. And if one has to post elsewhere, how is it done? Thanks! Love, Balveen

Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/26/2015 8:48:00 AM

Hi Alexis! How are you doing? Thanks !

Paul Callus

Date: 10/25/2015 12:32:00 PM

Beautiful, both the shape and the imagery, Cheema. You are creative and artistic! Congratulations on being placed first. ~ Regards // paul

Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/26/2015 8:51:00 AM

Paul, with your praises I am in seventh heaven! Thanks ever so much! Regards, Balveen

Jan Allison

Date: 10/25/2015 12:07:00 PM

woohooooo so glad this is at the top of the podium for you Balveen - congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/26/2015 8:53:00 AM

Jan, thanks for giving me some space! You're hogging all the limelight! Honestly speaking you write so beautifully! Love, Balveen

Lin Lane

Date: 10/24/2015 1:29:00 PM

Excellent, Balveen. Now, if you could just draw me in somewhere on that walkway, it'd be perfect! 7 from me for the artwork and the roses and honeysuckle.

Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/24/2015 1:33:00 PM

Lin, how incredibly sweet of you! Love, Balveen

Jan Allison

Date: 10/24/2015 11:43:00 AM

Outstanding!!!! I can say no more am blown away by this creative gem:-) hugs Jan xx

Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/24/2015 12:18:00 PM

Thanks Jan! Did it for the first time! Wondered what the response would be. Love, Balveen