Balveen Cheema Poet Concrete

Creative Layouts

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                                                   My Quaint Cottage
                                          The quaintness of my cottage
                                     Is idyllic in my sweet resting thoughts.
                                 My miniature garden rarely noticed by one
                         Is garlanded with fenced shrubs and flowery visions. 
                                           My orange clustered tree
                                           Showers      } {        its love 
                                           onto my       } {      cascade
                                           of verses    }    {     as I rest
                                           against      }       {   its sturdy 
                                           bark on  }             {a silent day
                      My green walled cottage is sewn intricately with ivy 
                                                     Leaving an 
                                                  Arched door 
                                              Open Fringed 
                                        With fresh roses
                                     Attracting the 
                                Honey suckles
                              Hanging in air                                          
                           Fluttering 
                       Their wings
           For ## but # one ## sip

           In ## my ##### garden

           Of # b# l #o # o # m # s


FIRST
Balveen Cheema
October 24, 2015
Judged 
Contest: Creative Layouts
Sponsor: Broken Wings

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Bill Lindsay October 28, 2015 at 10:51 AM ~A lovely piece, well done! Balveen Cheema October 28, 2015 at 11:04 AM Thanks dor your appreciation, Bill!

Skat A October 27, 2015 at 9:36 PM Balveen, Wonderful win. SKAT Balveen Cheema October 28, 2015 at 11:05 AM I'm glad you consider it so, Skat! Love, Balveen

Sneha Rv October 26, 2015 at 10:49 PM This is so so lovely!! Congrats on your wonderful win!! :D :D Balveen Cheema October 26, 2015 at 10:52 PM Thanks Sneha! That's my cottage! Love, Balveen

Connie Marcum Wong October 26, 2015 at 7:44 AM Balveen, how creative and beautiful your poem is. Congratulations on your wonderful deserving first place win! Balveen Cheema October 26, 2015 at 8:41 AM Thanks Connie!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 26, 2015 at 12:56 AM Congrats on ur superb first place win with this creative layout n wonderful poetry Balveen! Balveen Cheema October 26, 2015 at 8:42 AM Upma, thank you so much!

Sandra Haight October 25, 2015 at 7:15 PM Congratulations on your 1st Place win for your very creative layout and wonderful poem. Hugs, Sandra Balveen Cheema October 26, 2015 at 8:43 AM Sandra dear, thanks for your appreciation! Love, Balveen

James Inman October 25, 2015 at 4:57 PM So impressive Balveen. Great poem and layout. Balveen Cheema October 26, 2015 at 8:43 AM Thanks James!

Dan Cwiak October 25, 2015 at 3:08 PM Great write and very creative in layout, Balveen. Kudos to you on this winner. Balveen Cheema October 26, 2015 at 8:45 AM I'm so glad you liked it Dan! Thanks!

Alexis Y. October 25, 2015 at 1:25 PM Balveen, congratulations on your 1 st place win:-) Alexis Balveen Cheema October 27, 2015 at 9:35 AM Alexis, when a sponsor asks to post a poem online, does it mean we have to post it elsewhere other than submitting for a contest? Kindly assist. I'm still quite ignorant and confused. And if one has to post elsewhere, how is it done? Thanks! Love, Balveen Balveen Cheema October 26, 2015 at 8:48 AM Hi Alexis! How are you doing? Thanks !

Paul Callus October 25, 2015 at 12:32 PM Beautiful, both the shape and the imagery, Cheema. You are creative and artistic! Congratulations on being placed first. ~ Regards // paul Balveen Cheema October 26, 2015 at 8:51 AM Paul, with your praises I am in seventh heaven! Thanks ever so much! Regards, Balveen

Jan Allison October 25, 2015 at 12:07 PM woohooooo so glad this is at the top of the podium for you Balveen - congrats:-) hugs Jan xx Balveen Cheema October 26, 2015 at 8:53 AM Jan, thanks for giving me some space! You're hogging all the limelight! Honestly speaking you write so beautifully! Love, Balveen

Lin Lane October 24, 2015 at 1:29 PM Excellent, Balveen. Now, if you could just draw me in somewhere on that walkway, it'd be perfect! 7 from me for the artwork and the roses and honeysuckle. Balveen Cheema October 24, 2015 at 1:33 PM Lin, how incredibly sweet of you! Love, Balveen

Jan Allison October 24, 2015 at 11:43 AM Outstanding!!!! I can say no more am blown away by this creative gem:-) hugs Jan xx Balveen Cheema October 24, 2015 at 12:18 PM Thanks Jan! Did it for the first time! Wondered what the response would be. Love, Balveen