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                                                   My Quaint Cottage
                                          The quaintness of my cottage
                                     Is idyllic in my sweet resting thoughts.
                                 My miniature garden rarely noticed by one
                         Is garlanded with fenced shrubs and flowery visions. 
                                           My orange clustered tree
                                           Showers      } {        its love 
                                           onto my       } {      cascade
                                           of verses    }    {     as I rest
                                           against      }       {   its sturdy 
                                           bark on  }             {a silent day
                      My green walled cottage is sewn intricately with ivy 
                                                     Leaving an 
                                                  Arched door 
                                              Open Fringed 
                                        With fresh roses
                                     Attracting the 
                                Honey suckles
                              Hanging in air                                          
                           Fluttering 
                       Their wings
           For ## but # one ## sip

           In ## my ##### garden

           Of # b# l #o # o # m # s


FIRST
Balveen Cheema
October 24, 2015
Judged 
Contest: Creative Layouts
Sponsor: Broken Wings

Copyright © Balveen Cheema | Year Posted 2015

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Bill Lindsay Date: 10/28/2015 10:51:00 AM ~A lovely piece, well done! Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 10/28/2015 11:04:00 AM Thanks dor your appreciation, Bill!

Skat A Date: 10/27/2015 9:36:00 PM Balveen, Wonderful win. SKAT Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 10/28/2015 11:05:00 AM I'm glad you consider it so, Skat! Love, Balveen

Sneha Rv Date: 10/26/2015 10:49:00 PM This is so so lovely!! Congrats on your wonderful win!! :D :D Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 10/26/2015 10:52:00 PM Thanks Sneha! That's my cottage! Love, Balveen

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 10/26/2015 7:44:00 AM Balveen, how creative and beautiful your poem is. Congratulations on your wonderful deserving first place win! Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 10/26/2015 8:41:00 AM Thanks Connie!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 10/26/2015 12:56:00 AM Congrats on ur superb first place win with this creative layout n wonderful poetry Balveen! Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 10/26/2015 8:42:00 AM Upma, thank you so much!

Sandra Haight Date: 10/25/2015 7:15:00 PM Congratulations on your 1st Place win for your very creative layout and wonderful poem. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 10/26/2015 8:43:00 AM Sandra dear, thanks for your appreciation! Love, Balveen

James Inman Date: 10/25/2015 4:57:00 PM So impressive Balveen. Great poem and layout. Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 10/26/2015 8:43:00 AM Thanks James!

Dan Cwiak Date: 10/25/2015 3:08:00 PM Great write and very creative in layout, Balveen. Kudos to you on this winner. Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 10/26/2015 8:45:00 AM I'm so glad you liked it Dan! Thanks!

Alexis Y. Date: 10/25/2015 1:25:00 PM Balveen, congratulations on your 1 st place win:-) Alexis Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 10/27/2015 9:35:00 AM Alexis, when a sponsor asks to post a poem online, does it mean we have to post it elsewhere other than submitting for a contest? Kindly assist. I'm still quite ignorant and confused. And if one has to post elsewhere, how is it done? Thanks! Love, Balveen Balveen Cheema Date: 10/26/2015 8:48:00 AM Hi Alexis! How are you doing? Thanks !

Paul Callus Date: 10/25/2015 12:32:00 PM Beautiful, both the shape and the imagery, Cheema. You are creative and artistic! Congratulations on being placed first. ~ Regards // paul Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 10/26/2015 8:51:00 AM Paul, with your praises I am in seventh heaven! Thanks ever so much! Regards, Balveen

Jan Allison Date: 10/25/2015 12:07:00 PM woohooooo so glad this is at the top of the podium for you Balveen - congrats:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 10/26/2015 8:53:00 AM Jan, thanks for giving me some space! You're hogging all the limelight! Honestly speaking you write so beautifully! Love, Balveen

Lin Lane Date: 10/24/2015 1:29:00 PM Excellent, Balveen. Now, if you could just draw me in somewhere on that walkway, it'd be perfect! 7 from me for the artwork and the roses and honeysuckle. Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 10/24/2015 1:33:00 PM Lin, how incredibly sweet of you! Love, Balveen

Jan Allison Date: 10/24/2015 11:43:00 AM Outstanding!!!! I can say no more am blown away by this creative gem:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 10/24/2015 12:18:00 PM Thanks Jan! Did it for the first time! Wondered what the response would be. Love, Balveen