Creative Conformity

I have a lovely daughter, who is a lovely mess,
for every rule you give her, she will have to test.
She’s always just inside the lines or balanced on the top.
She loves to challenge all the rules to see how they will flop.

My favorite of her hurdles was the school uniform,
and she was delighted to best this strict form of norm.
A uniform would be an insult to her fashion sense.
As her mother, I suspected the rules would soon be mince.

She wore exactly what they said: khakis, belt, white top.
You've probably guessed, though thusly dressed she did not stop.

Smiling like an actress in a play,
she wore a striped scarf with red beret.
Her belt was wide and trendy,
her shoes, black boots to knee.

A voguish olive blazer was her “coat.”
Stylishly outfitted 
and with the rules outwitted,
the books she carried seemed a lighter tote...

The "book bag," after all, was a fabulous new purse!
and...
Her creative conformity sent the principal to the nurse.

There is something to be learned here, as I reflect on this bright girl.
Without the rules before them, there’d be no rebels in the world.


11/2/2018
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Dutta Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 9:10 PM
Congrats to your creative lovely daughter.Blessing.
Awtry Avatar
November 11, 2018 at 9:00 AM
Thank you Anisha.
Daniel Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 5:32 AM
Clever ending line, Awtry:)
Awtry Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 8:36 AM
Thank you Jo :)
Andresen Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 3:57 AM
- Most children will try to expand the boundaries :) - A great described poem, P.S.A. :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Awtry Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 8:36 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise
Roper Avatar
November 7, 2018 at 10:08 PM
I love the poem, I think we all have children like that... good luck in the contest :)
Awtry Avatar
November 7, 2018 at 11:43 PM
Thank you, Eve. I am glad you liked it :)
La France Avatar
November 4, 2018 at 10:25 AM
PS, you have penned a great poem for the contest, I could see this stylish young lady on her way to school, well done !
Awtry Avatar
November 4, 2018 at 10:45 AM
Thank you, Dear :)
Krutsinger Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 2:42 PM
You rose to the occasion with this wonderful missive, my friend. Well done, and I hope your daughter has retained this self-awareness and smartness.
Awtry Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 3:33 PM
Yes she has :) Thank you, Caren!
Green Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 1:06 PM
This was great and sounds like something I would do or would have done when I was younger. : )
Awtry Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 1:52 PM
Thank you, Chris :)
Palli Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 12:57 PM
Love this! Going to favorites! Thanks, P.S.
Awtry Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 1:52 PM
Thank you so much, Susan!
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