Creation Story, From the Tongue Outward

In the beginning, there was salt. 

It hung in the air like unfinished scripture,
gathered in the throat of the sea,
waited for a mouth dumb enough
to mistake thirst for an invitation.

Then butter,
smeared on the void like gossip,
greased the dark’s knuckles 
like an understudy,
taught the abyss to melt.

The first sound was not speech—
it was a swallow,
a hush,
a crack of cartilage between molars.
We spoke in reductions.
Grammar dripped from the bones.

On the second day, teeth—
tiny altars lined with nerve—
ground memory into ashable pulp.
Pomegranates burst like promises.
Figs cloaked their apples in lace.

By the third, we named what softened.
We named what burned.
Built ziggurats from rind to rind.
Wrote psalms in onion skin.

The fourth hung hunger in the firmament—
a constellation shaped like mouths
mid-ask.

On the fifth, we forgot the recipe
and mourned it like a god.

By the sixth, we’d tongued every fruit
that offered a rumor of sugar.
We learned:
the mouth is a beast with no leash
and excellent taste.

And on the seventh, we lay full and feral,
belly to sky, 
licking 
the holy oil from our fingers.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 5/1/2025 10:25:00 AM
Wow. In The Beginning, has never been so sweet. Your poem is unusual. It is a strike of genius.
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Date: 5/4/2025 5:39:00 AM
You flatter me, Hilda. I'll take it lol. This was the result of an image prompt from another site but I try to write ekphrasis so they can stand without the picture because you never know about copyrights and such. I sure appreciate you taking the time to comment and I love the pun you made "so sweet" - it made me genuinely laugh out loud. Have a wonderful day and thank you again :)
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