Creation Iv

God: 

the primordial mathematical equation

that 

has solved the problem presented

by

the inherent opposite forces in the universe 

so as 

to achieve the necessary equilibrium 

which

is imperative for paving the noetic way

for 

the eternally unfolding 

of

miraculous creation!







© Demetrios Trifiatis
   10 December 2016

* I am back after a week of illness.

creationgodfree verse

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/21/2016 10:36:00 AM

Your dance with words here was lovely to watch my dear...splendid....loved noetic. Superb

Doug Vinson

Date: 12/12/2016 11:42:00 PM

It's amazing what pleasure words and color can give us. : ) I had a long drive today, across the midwestern and eastern U.S., and everything was 4 colors - white snow, gray sky, brown fields, black trees. Refreshing to read this poem, the beautiful words and pacing, and to see the yellow and green.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/11/2016 12:47:00 AM

I hope you are feeling well again Demitrios. Sorry to hear you were ill. What a splendidl design in God's perfect creation is this flower. You have expressed this so well Demetrios!; )7

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/11/2016 2:46:00 AM

Thank you dear, Connie, you are so kind!

Doug Vinson

Date: 12/10/2016 7:40:00 PM

Always glad to see your name, Demetrios. There are a lot of miracles, when you think about it. I went to dictionary.com to look up "noetic," and "footle" is the word of the day. A verb, though, nothing of a noun yet ascribed. Great picture, too, saturated color, light and dark. It was -7 degrees C. here today, not many flowers blooming. ; ) I wish health, happiness and peace for you in this holiday season.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/11/2016 2:57:00 AM

My dear friend,Doug, if you allow me I will explain the word "noetic" for it is a Greek word in this case is an adjective which comes from the noun "Nous" which means mental ability, intellect, supreme intelligence! Thank you so much for your good words!