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~Creation~ (Star of David) God Is the Creator He made the whole Universe and formed man The Bible doesn't explain where God just came from But it says clear that He was always there This is a mystery to me too But I just believe, accept God created all just perfect In fact made us good and pure Adam and Eve had wonderful lives They ruled over everything God made Adam just didn't have to work for a living Didn't face pain or death Till both did sin After that It was Hell Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2010
~Author's Notes: The 'Star of David' is a poetry style created by Dorian Petersen Potter, aka ladydp2000, on October 22, 2009.

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Date: 10/29/2015 4:37:00 AM
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/7/2015 10:21:00 PM
Thank you ever so kindly,Diane, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply appreciate your kind visit, comments:)Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you always!:)

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