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Create the emptiness

The space between stars is not empty, So the chance to be great is plenty, That's by finding emptiness a space And making yourself shine in that place. So far, your head isn't in the cloud, Strive hard to stand out in any crowd, Though, stars glow less bright for a stranger, But sunshine sweat can be the changer. You have to find that space to twinkle, You have to shine out of a crinkle. That's the surest way to break the jinx, And to welcome success when it winks. Though, the space is full of obstacles, And chance of success in particles. You must form that emptiness to fill, So finding the space must be your skill. 25th October, 2024

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Date: 10/25/2024 7:41:00 PM
Finding your space and shining in it - sounds like a good idea. I nice upbeat message Maclawrence.
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Date: 10/25/2024 7:50:00 PM
I appreciate your comment.

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