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Crazy In Love (Quick)

A love like this lasts longer than a day, Above all, my heart screams the words "Will you stay?" Years have gone by, emotions have grown stronger A mere cry for help, cant be without you any longer. Like white to a dove we go together, well sort of, Like Eminem and Kim, we're just so crazy in love. The light of your face burns a hole right through me, I"ll never understand just what it is you do to me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/28/2009 12:39:00 AM
if anyone has any ideas on how i can expand my style.. i am all ears. everything i write sounds the same to me. 2 bar rhymes.. any advice??
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Date: 8/26/2009 8:02:00 PM
This is quite a piece.....keep it up -Jessica
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Date: 8/25/2009 6:31:00 AM
Invisable, thank you for sharing your writing with us today. I truly enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
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