Craziness

Upon laying eyes on your nakedness
It comes to mind the feeling of insecurity
Let alone having head in the clouds

Every moment I reckon to be with you
To be the finest living soul
Whom you could ever depend on

But I’ve heard how much you love her
That even her death does not stop you
From being devoted and amorous to her

It cuts me deep all the more so
Should I beg to get your attention?
All hail the craziness but that won’t stop me

After all this time, I remain firm
Even if I know you’re six feet under
I keep up on loving you…


10.12.17

Second place
"Deep and Dark II"
by Laura Loo

Third Place
"Poems that Paint a Picture 4"
by Silent One

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Date: 11/28/2023 1:17:00 PM
Lovely... Congratulations
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Date: 11/6/2017 12:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderfully dark win, MF - blessings, and keep up the great work ... this one is a gem and repeat winner! :-)
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Date: 10/28/2017 10:36:00 PM
Moon Flower, congratulation on your win Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 10/13/2017 10:45:00 PM
Moon Flower - congratulations on your well-written win, my friend - nicely done! :-)
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Moon Flower
Date: 10/14/2017 12:14:00 AM
Hi Gregory, my friend. Thank you. :)
Date: 10/13/2017 5:54:00 AM
This is very deep, we never stop loving someone..Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Moon Flower
Date: 10/14/2017 12:06:00 AM
I'm truly pleased, Silent. :)
Date: 10/12/2017 6:55:00 PM
A deep and dark write Moon Flower. Very awesome, especially your last verse and line. Enjoyed!
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Moon Flower
Date: 10/12/2017 11:03:00 PM
Glad you liked it, Susan. And thank you for the kind words. :)
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