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Crazed Raccoon

the voices are particularly loud today, they taunt and plague me with their pleas the label I hide on the wine bottle they ask me if I'm drinking yellow tail I take another swig, and then one more step cautiously to toss it in the trash they told me of the psycho cat’s demise but I still watch out for that crazed raccoon eerie boardwalk creaks near the white sand beach that whale that lives under must be awake people in masks walk by, avoid my eyes as though I'm ruining their summer day Security keeps shooing me away their taser guns ensuring I comply sabbatical dreams after quarantine: some place to lie down and be left alone Written 3 Nov 2020 In collaboration with Kim Rodrigues [her lines are in bold]

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Date: 11/7/2020 11:08:00 AM
I love all the detail in this, like 'taunt and plague me' and 'people in masks walk by avoid my eyes' ~ such is life under covid. I thought from the title it would be more playful, but I appreciate the solemn depths you found, an insightful collaboration!
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John Watt
Date: 11/7/2020 12:21:00 PM
Thank you Michelle. This was outside my normal zone of writing, but thought I'd give it a try. Thanks for reading and sharing your encouraging insights. ~ John
Date: 11/5/2020 3:03:00 PM
I agree with JO. you did a brilliant job with her lines. MINE is so dang wordy!! The lines really lent themselves to Covid tales!!
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John Watt
Date: 11/5/2020 3:41:00 PM
This is way more surreal than my usual. Thought it was at least worth a try. Now pass me the Yellow Tail...
Date: 11/4/2020 1:03:00 AM
Sad, but brilliantly written, John:)
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John Watt
Date: 11/4/2020 8:29:00 PM
Thanks for the visits today, Jo.
Date: 11/3/2020 9:40:00 AM
sounds like you had too much of the yellow tail (but its understandable if its the Shiraz my friend says it's very nice!) you wove the words in so well John, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Watt
Date: 11/3/2020 10:59:00 AM
Thank you, my friend, that was the effect I was going for; the sad effects of hard living on the streets. I do appreciate you and your kind visits.

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