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Crayon of Bright Red

Red is the crayon that I love to use. So vivid and bright without any abuse. I color so lively and make each stroke count. Even making the water red in the fount. In my pictures the hair on everyone's head. Yes you guessed it, they're all a bright colored red! The seasons of summer and winter and fall. I color them all red without any appall. So if you're an artist you plainly can see. Everything will be red if you depend on me. If you've heard like me, as it's often been said, That "Passionate people always love red!"

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Date: 9/19/2011 11:16:00 AM
fantastic love the rhyme
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Date: 5/18/2010 8:18:00 AM
I love the last line. Red is indeed the color of passion. I will have to start incorporating red into my daily life now
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Date: 4/15/2010 6:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda's contest Marty. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/12/2010 2:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Marty...Peace, Audrey
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Date: 4/10/2010 3:30:00 PM
Congrats Marty- I knew you'd win
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Date: 4/10/2010 1:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win. Aloha, Connie
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Date: 4/8/2010 7:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Marty. Joyce
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Date: 4/7/2010 6:05:00 PM
Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest to my other comment. Enjoy your success. Way to go! Karen
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Date: 4/7/2010 5:59:00 PM
Congratulations Marty Looks like your red on the head did it for you. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/7/2010 3:26:00 PM
So you are one passionate guy, Marty. I love red, too. Congrats on your win in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/7/2010 3:23:00 PM
A delightful poem...Congratulations on this winner, Marty! Great job! ~ Carrie
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Date: 4/7/2010 3:13:00 PM
Congrats on your win in the colorlful contest. Good one. BG Red is really my favorite too..BG
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Date: 4/7/2010 2:42:00 PM
Marty, many congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's fine contest >> James
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Date: 4/7/2010 2:11:00 PM
Congrats Marty on your 5th place win in my contest.. a wonderful poem and my favorite color too... well deserved and thankxxx for supporting my contest..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/4/2010 3:06:00 PM
Nice use of imagery and rhyme to share your thoughts. Good luck in the contest! Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 4/3/2010 11:08:00 PM
funny- I still ain't got mine done- GL
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Date: 4/3/2010 1:27:00 PM
Great write and choice of color...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 4/3/2010 10:58:00 AM
I Love red,though my hair isnt bright red,lol,its auburnish brown. .this poem made laugh,loved it dear,Happy Red Easter,Charma.
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Date: 4/3/2010 9:59:00 AM
Very nice write, passionate Marty and very well written. Good luck on the contest. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 4/3/2010 2:29:00 AM
haha!! Loved this! Lighthearted,refreshing and fun! Excellent!
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Date: 4/3/2010 1:40:00 AM
I guess that makes you a passionate person Marty... great rhyme for a great colour....cheers Margaret
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Date: 4/3/2010 12:27:00 AM
Like this one a lot. Great visual.
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Date: 4/2/2010 11:41:00 PM
a well vivid write . nice
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