Cravings

leaves, sun-filtered... shine around light... gnarled limbs wrap tight ~ rain... thirsty roots... crave

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Date: 6/2/2020 6:19:00 PM

ohh, that middle line. It really shows the way the tree craves water.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/2/2020 6:46:00 PM

You know, I hadn't even realized that aspect of the middle line. Thanks for opening my eyes, Andrea! Cheers, Gershon

Date: 6/2/2020 3:41:00 AM

Imagery, great, haiku says so much...love it.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/2/2020 6:45:00 PM

Thanks for the support, Harry. Best to you, Gershon

Date: 6/2/2020 2:28:00 AM

A drop of life giving water goes a long way. Tom

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/2/2020 6:44:00 PM

Drop by drop. ~ A Big Drip

Date: 6/1/2020 11:21:00 PM

I love this imaginative and beautifully expressed haiku. Very nice! :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/2/2020 6:44:00 PM

Gee, thanks!!! Appreciated, Evelyn! Best always, Gershon