Line Gauthier Poet Monoku

Notes About The Poem

Craving something real

the sound of tin and not a peep coming from your heart



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Submitted on June 13, 2025 for contest WHY I ABHOR AI GENERATED POEMS sponsored by JCB BRUL  -  RANKED 4TH

and July 16, 2025 for contest SCREWED XXI sponosred by ROB CARMACK - RANKED 9TH

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Sara Kendrick June 28, 2025 at 3:13 AM Congratulations on your winning work in the contest. Way to go. Sara K Line Gauthier June 28, 2025 at 12:23 PM Thank you, Sara ~

Reason A. Poteet June 17, 2025 at 6:35 AM Congratulations, Line. I agree a real wordsmith is no tinsmith. Line Gauthier June 17, 2025 at 9:20 AM Well said ~ thanks

Andrea Dietrich June 16, 2025 at 3:48 PM Congrats. I really liked yours Line Gauthier June 17, 2025 at 3:55 AM Thanks Andrea, much appreciated ~

David Kavanagh June 16, 2025 at 10:45 AM Sounds about right, flatline poetry, congratulations Line, cheers David Line Gauthier June 17, 2025 at 3:55 AM Thanks, David ~

Crystol Woods June 16, 2025 at 7:05 AM Plainly started truth with a dare to flare,great!xo Line Gauthier June 16, 2025 at 8:39 AM Thanks, Crystol ~

Andrea Dietrich June 14, 2025 at 9:08 AM That is a powerful one, Line. Line Gauthier June 14, 2025 at 9:52 AM Merci, Andrea ~ have a lovely day

sara Etgen-Baker June 13, 2025 at 4:41 PM well said...real! Line Gauthier June 13, 2025 at 4:50 PM Thank you very much for the visit and comment ~

Kim Rodrigues June 13, 2025 at 11:50 AM Great description! Line Gauthier June 13, 2025 at 4:18 PM Thanks, Kim ~ have a great day