Craps

I now have a point. I’m taking my odds. I’m making place bets. Cover the table. I’m looking to win. Rolling the bones to get my point. Go lady luck! Be nice to me. What the heck? Seven out! There it goes. I lose. No bread. Broke.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/28/2011 4:13:00 PM

Robert, this is me...every time i'm looking to win.... i say.... craps at the end... I'm not a gambler... but, with issues around me i am... I'm gonna tell you one thing after reading this poem.... I won't ever ever ask you to be my partner at any gambling game...lol..<---- JOKE... A xool poem to read.. Take care,...p.d.

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/28/2011 2:13:00 PM

I just love this write Robert! I've never seen this Form before...I really like it! Don't know if I could do one very effectively, though I really like verse! Thanks for introducing this for to me! Outstanding Work!!