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Crap Trap

When a know-it-all paints the wall With your silhouette in excrement... Do not engage the louse, For a fly does not enter a closed mouth. 8/15/2019

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P.S. Awtry

Date: 11/7/2019 12:08:00 AM

giggles... Maureen nobody can do what you do! amazed!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 11/7/2019 1:02:00 PM

Tee hee ;D, Thank you! <3 xomo

Indiana Shaw

Date: 9/6/2019 3:17:00 AM

You're going down in history Maureen and this one is going up on my wall . . . ; )

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 9/6/2019 8:34:00 AM

Elated you love it! Thank you <3 xomo!

Ann Foster

Date: 9/3/2019 9:08:00 PM

OMG ... this one I am committing to memory. Wonderful... Flowers and small butterflies fill your day in unexpected ways. Ann

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 9/4/2019 7:08:00 AM

GIGGLES! I withdrew this from the contest when the sponsor put "TASTEFUL" in the requirements ;D, And I do have a little butterfly filling my day! New puppy client :))) Hugs! xomo

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/23/2019 2:14:00 AM

This one is so sagely wise, and yet has such an image! Whoa! I am running back up to re-read it!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/23/2019 7:33:00 AM

Giggles ;), I can only hope the sponsor feels like that too~ Hugs! xomo

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/16/2019 4:26:00 PM

Well this is an attention grabber, and wise council to boot, best of luck in the contest, Maureen-

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/23/2019 7:30:00 AM

Tee hee ;), Thank you Michelle! xomo

Jeff Connelly

Date: 8/15/2019 7:10:00 PM

Holy interVenus di Milo fly trap Batman. Wow this poem is a killer Maureen!!!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/16/2019 9:11:00 AM

Hahaha love it! Thank you Jeff!!! xomo

Ilene Bauer

Date: 8/15/2019 4:20:00 PM

ha! well done, maureen!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/16/2019 9:18:00 AM

Thank you Ilene! ;), xomo!

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/15/2019 4:05:00 PM

Wow - quite the image, Maureen. Well done.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/16/2019 9:16:00 AM

Tee hee ;), Thank you Line! xomo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/15/2019 3:43:00 PM

"crappy" imagery :) GL in contest

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/16/2019 9:14:00 AM

LOL!!! ;D, Thank you! xomo <3

David Mchattie

Date: 8/15/2019 2:15:00 PM

Deep stuff my friend. Have a great day.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/16/2019 9:13:00 AM

Thank you David! And you :))) xomo!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/15/2019 12:53:00 PM

This is so brilliantly written..awesome..potent..WOW!!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/16/2019 9:12:00 AM

Thank you so much Vijay! xomo!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/15/2019 11:33:00 AM

I am at a loss for words. So, bravo! (Btw: If s/o does paint my silhouette in excrement, and I can't remove it from my walls, does that make the walls inexcrable? LOL). What an entry for the contest!!!!! :) gw

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/15/2019 11:38:00 AM

Lol! Love it ;D, Thank you Wolf Man! xomo <3