Craftsman Extraordinary

Naked, abused, humiliated
Crumpled human shell, lifeless and deflated
Holy spirit risen to Godly ministry
Beyond the grave and dust
Forever, majestic ruler
Satan crushed, Christ Exalted!



For Raul Moreno's contest-The Deposition by Michelangelo
Thank you Raul for the challenge, great work!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Haick Avatar
December 21, 2009 at 8:49 AM
Congratulations Dear Doris for your win in Raul's contest! Great job! Peace and love, Audrey
George   Avatar
December 19, 2009 at 1:48 PM
Doris, this is so touching. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Love, Lainie
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December 19, 2009 at 8:30 AM
Awesome! Congrats on your success in Raul's contest. Merry Christmas, Caroline.
Strand Avatar
December 19, 2009 at 8:23 AM
Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Doris.Rgds Brian
Richards Avatar
December 19, 2009 at 7:39 AM
Congratulations, Doris..on this wonderful depiction of Michelangelo's masterpiece! A winning poem! ~ Love, Carrie
Fraser Avatar
December 19, 2009 at 4:56 AM
Many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest Doris, Merry Christmas >> James
Moreno Avatar
December 19, 2009 at 3:05 AM
Doris, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul
Canady Avatar
December 4, 2009 at 5:20 PM
Yes, So Beautifully True ! ... Love This One Doris ... Your Faith Is Risen For Glory Too! Oh, & Check Soup Mail ... MoonBee
Kendrick Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 4:15 PM
Nicely done my daughter. Keep the magical and creative pen flowing. Hope you have recovered from the scare and God be with you tomorrow. Mom
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December 3, 2009 at 12:52 PM
Very compelling perspective on the artwork, Doris. Excellent, thought-provoking write! Good luck in the contest. Love, Carolyn
Gumbo Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 11:11 AM
Wonderful write Doris! Well done and good luck with the challenge! :)
Pickett Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 9:24 AM
Well written, I love the word-play.... Great write.....:JP]
Sweetheart Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 8:58 AM
Bravo Doris on this expression of faith in poetry... very meaningful write.. my "thankxxx" is my own creation for thanks ..I have been signing off that way most of my adult life so its my signature stamp.. I think I got it from God to signify unique spirit... at least I'd like to think He had a hand in it... thankxxx for enjoying my poetry today... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
Thomas Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 7:29 AM
Wonderful entry, and so uplifting...From sorrow comes great joy. Good luck in the contest with this one! ~Juliane
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