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Naked, abused, humiliated Crumpled human shell, lifeless and deflated Holy spirit risen to Godly ministry Beyond the grave and dust Forever, majestic ruler Satan crushed, Christ Exalted! For Raul Moreno's contest-The Deposition by Michelangelo Thank you Raul for the challenge, great work!!

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Date: 12/21/2009 8:49:00 AM
Congratulations Dear Doris for your win in Raul's contest! Great job! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 12/19/2009 1:48:00 PM
Doris, this is so touching. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Love, Lainie
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Date: 12/19/2009 8:30:00 AM
Awesome! Congrats on your success in Raul's contest. Merry Christmas, Caroline.
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Date: 12/19/2009 8:23:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Doris.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/19/2009 7:39:00 AM
Congratulations, Doris..on this wonderful depiction of Michelangelo's masterpiece! A winning poem! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/19/2009 4:56:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest Doris, Merry Christmas >> James
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Date: 12/19/2009 3:05:00 AM
Doris, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul
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Date: 12/4/2009 5:20:00 PM
Yes, So Beautifully True ! ... Love This One Doris ... Your Faith Is Risen For Glory Too! Oh, & Check Soup Mail ... MoonBee
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Date: 12/3/2009 4:15:00 PM
Nicely done my daughter. Keep the magical and creative pen flowing. Hope you have recovered from the scare and God be with you tomorrow. Mom
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Date: 12/3/2009 12:52:00 PM
Very compelling perspective on the artwork, Doris. Excellent, thought-provoking write! Good luck in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/3/2009 11:11:00 AM
Wonderful write Doris! Well done and good luck with the challenge! :)
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Date: 12/3/2009 9:24:00 AM
Well written, I love the word-play.... Great write.....:JP]
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Date: 12/3/2009 8:58:00 AM
Bravo Doris on this expression of faith in poetry... very meaningful write.. my "thankxxx" is my own creation for thanks ..I have been signing off that way most of my adult life so its my signature stamp.. I think I got it from God to signify unique spirit... at least I'd like to think He had a hand in it... thankxxx for enjoying my poetry today... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 12/3/2009 7:29:00 AM
Wonderful entry, and so uplifting...From sorrow comes great joy. Good luck in the contest with this one! ~Juliane
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