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April 30- 2025
Your Choice X Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Brian Strand

 

as the glowworms in the stygian night threw flickers of light like scattered gems, when little birdies cuddled under their mother’s warmth, while the long whistle of a train was dying in the distance, I sensed the indulgent grip of the hands of Sleep who took me to his gilded chamber of dreams!

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Date: 5/1/2025 5:18:00 AM
Dearest Valsa, Ahhhh the gentle magic of night where each image a flicker of comfort, like glowworms scattering gems in darkness. I felt the hush of distant whistles, the warmth of sheltering wings, and the tender surrender to sleep’s embrace. It is amazing how even the quietest moments can shimmer with wonder and guide us softly into dreams. Your words are a soothing light. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 5/1/2025 3:30:00 AM
dreams are awesome, and necessity, enjoyed
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Date: 4/30/2025 2:09:00 PM
Oh so lovely. I love a good Dreamland
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Date: 4/30/2025 2:09:00 PM
A fave
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Date: 4/30/2025 10:45:00 AM
Ahh..., I feel relaxed and ready to sleep. Nice work.
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Date: 4/30/2025 7:32:00 AM
- Your words bring a wonderful feeling, Valsa :) - hugs
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Date: 4/30/2025 7:16:00 AM
Wonderful personification. True spirit of poetry. Love it! Pen and paper always near my dreamy bed stead.
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Date: 4/30/2025 5:42:00 AM
So beautiful, Valsa! Fave
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