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Cracked Vase- Mcwhirtle

A broken heart Is like a cracked vase Affection can't stay Love left without a trace Hurt runs deep It needs healing & space But true love prevails! So powerful, you embrace Inspired by the McWhirtle contest Sponsor: Charles Messina 11/15/19

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Jan Allison

Date: 12/26/2019 1:56:00 PM

such a true poem Alexis, Many congratulations on your win, I hope you had a wonderful Christmas:-) hugs Jan xx

Charles Messina

Date: 12/24/2019 9:29:00 AM

I really like this poem, Alexis. Well written and wonderfully expressed. Congratulations on your win. Happy Holidays.. Charlie

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/24/2019 10:23:00 AM

Hi Charles, You hosted a good contest. I appreciate my placement. It like an early Christmas present. Happy Holidays to you too:-) Alexis

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/17/2019 1:46:00 PM

Nicely done for the contest, Alexis

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/17/2019 3:04:00 AM

Outstanding poem full of meaning and deep knowledge of heart's ways dearest, Alexis!

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/16/2019 2:05:00 AM

A gorgeous poem, Alexis! Beautifully expressed ... each line spills such ink tenderness. Pure pulse poetry! A golden goodie fave. Love and more love always.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/15/2019 11:24:00 PM

A wonderful entry. It will do great I'm sure. God bless you dear friend. Love, Gina

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/16/2019 8:36:00 AM

Hi Regina, Thanks for such a nice and encouraging comment. Have a great weekend my friend:-) Alexis

Winged Warrior

Date: 11/15/2019 9:23:00 AM

Excellent! my sister from another mister...Hi Alex...how are you, sweetie...brother dear is near lol...love ya babe...^WW^ :o)

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/16/2019 8:41:00 AM

Hey Bro, If I could give an award for comment of the day. You would get it hands down! You are such a bright light on the soup. I am so we are apart of the "soup" at the same. You make "soup" experience amazing. PS, You are so funny too. They say laughter is the best medicine . Thanks for giving me my medicine to. Have a fantastic weekend bro:-) Alexis

Chris Green

Date: 11/15/2019 7:54:00 AM

true love always prevails my friend as long as it is true on both sides. Beautifully written Alexis. Best wishes in the contest

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/16/2019 8:43:00 AM

Hi Chris, That is so true. I appreciate you and your support. Have a great day:-) Alexis