Cracked Vase- Mcwhirtle

A broken heart
Is like a cracked vase
Affection can't stay
Love left without a trace

Hurt runs deep
It needs healing & space
But true love prevails!
So powerful, you embrace



Inspired by the  McWhirtle contest
Sponsor: Charles Messina

11/15/19

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 12/26/2019 1:56:00 PM
such a true poem Alexis, Many congratulations on your win, I hope you had a wonderful Christmas:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/24/2019 9:29:00 AM
I really like this poem, Alexis. Well written and wonderfully expressed. Congratulations on your win. Happy Holidays.. Charlie
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Alexis Y.
Date: 12/24/2019 10:23:00 AM
Hi Charles, You hosted a good contest. I appreciate my placement. It like an early Christmas present. Happy Holidays to you too:-) Alexis
Date: 11/17/2019 1:46:00 PM
Nicely done for the contest, Alexis
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Date: 11/17/2019 3:04:00 AM
Outstanding poem full of meaning and deep knowledge of heart's ways dearest, Alexis!
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Date: 11/16/2019 2:05:00 AM
A gorgeous poem, Alexis! Beautifully expressed ... each line spills such ink tenderness. Pure pulse poetry! A golden goodie fave. Love and more love always.
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Date: 11/15/2019 11:24:00 PM
A wonderful entry. It will do great I'm sure. God bless you dear friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 11/16/2019 8:36:00 AM
Hi Regina, Thanks for such a nice and encouraging comment. Have a great weekend my friend:-) Alexis
Date: 11/15/2019 9:23:00 AM
Excellent! my sister from another mister...Hi Alex...how are you, sweetie...brother dear is near lol...love ya babe...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 11/16/2019 8:41:00 AM
Hey Bro, If I could give an award for comment of the day. You would get it hands down! You are such a bright light on the soup. I am so we are apart of the "soup" at the same. You make "soup" experience amazing. PS, You are so funny too. They say laughter is the best medicine . Thanks for giving me my medicine to. Have a fantastic weekend bro:-) Alexis
Date: 11/15/2019 7:54:00 AM
true love always prevails my friend as long as it is true on both sides. Beautifully written Alexis. Best wishes in the contest
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Date: 11/16/2019 8:43:00 AM
Hi Chris, That is so true. I appreciate you and your support. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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