Cracked Ribs and You

My shower last Saturday
Brought throbbing pain to my day
The soap made me slip
Got bruised on my hip
My ribs might be cracked they say

It hurts when I breathe or sneeze
Or if you give me a squeeze
The good times are gone
And so is the fun
My life’s no longer a breeze

The pain is constantly there
Even when I comb my hair
Hygiene’s getting tough 
So is “other” stuff
I’ve become a hairy bear

I wince with the jabbing pain
It’s sure to drive me insane
I can’t sit or stand
Need a helping hand
My bathroom trips are a drain!

My ribs reminds me of you
For no matter what I do
Your smile pokes me here
Your touch jabs me there
But your pain’s sweet.... through and through
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Andresen Avatar
December 5, 2012 at 2:51 AM
Hope you are doing well .... Be careful in the shower! - Nicely poem Eileen! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Manassian Avatar
December 5, 2012 at 8:06 AM
Anne Lise, I JUST got back from emergency. I have a two cm fracture on my 9th right rib. Yup...It is very painful, but this too shall last! Thanks for being so sweet and supportive! Hugs!
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