Cracked Crystal

I reach out with trepidation
to vibrate the flex of your aura.
Your eyes whisper tales of
violence and despair behind
    five layers of eye-shadow.
Stepping gently, we pirouette:
a hammer dancing with glass.

I watch as you pad away
to wash your disgust in
absolution like a baptism
of sulphuric acid and tears,
    seared within fiery memory.
Streaks dissolve in the erosion
once poisoned by the fear.

The sobbing echoes off the tiles
until quaking my resolve firm.
Her childlike features huddle nerves
along the basin floor, waiting
    patiently to flow once again
in the ebbing cradle of blackness
where prospect will find her again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bellefleur Avatar
June 19, 2009 at 10:40 AM
You say so much in this writing - I feel as though I am absorbing such mouthfuls of rich words - well done..
Devonshire Avatar
June 17, 2009 at 10:06 AM
There are so many women hiding their hearts beneath "five layers of eye shadow," John. Wish there was a way for all of us to see them and their "childlike features" through your poetic eyes. Beautiful poem! Love, Carolyn
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