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'cracked'

When she showed you her cracks she didn't expect you to fill them with lies she didn't expect you to fix them either she was exposing herself to you so you could see all of her she never wanted to be labelled broken she wanted to be seen as beautiful Especially with her cracks they made her the power house she is your only mistake was that you saw her cracks and you thought she needed fixing while all she longed for was to be treated equal and not be thought of as fragile Because she is so much more @270720161912

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Date: 1/15/2017 2:14:00 PM
I agree w/all of the talented poets/poetesses. A most powerful poem. Truth-telling is a rare poetic gift, which it appears you have an abundance of. A soul stirring poem, touches the heart and mind. Love this poem, dear. May love light your path in life always. Romantic Warrior
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Date: 10/9/2016 4:57:00 PM
Showing and fixing cracks. A common relationship problem -- usually rectified by time and age (usually). ;-)
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Date: 8/6/2016 1:25:00 AM
O Wilma, this conjures up such vived images about whàt transpired. Off course its well written.
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Date: 7/31/2016 4:34:00 AM
Yes, somehow, sometimes lines can get crossed and what we could perceive as a weakness can actually be strengths...I hope I am reading this right, Missy! This write of yours empowers as well as gives food for thought... I hope all is well with you-- I hope to catch up with you soon... <3
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Date: 7/27/2016 4:21:00 PM
wonderful! you've said this so beautifully, wilma, and with such strength. bravo!
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Date: 7/27/2016 3:41:00 PM
Poignant & powerful in its fragile message. I've been on both ends of the spectrum, sadly. But, it's how it has helped me grow & become better.
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Date: 7/27/2016 12:46:00 PM
- Often we forget to live .... more concerned with "cracks" - Great written, Wilma - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Wilma Neels
Date: 7/27/2016 2:18:00 PM
Hugs and thank you Anne-Lise :)

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