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Crack of Dawn

Commencement of day
Aurora hidden away
Onset first blush...clouds

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Doris Culverhouse

March 8, 2010 at 4:07 PM

congrats on the win in the contest!!

John Freeman

March 8, 2010 at 6:58 AM

Congratulations Sara in your success in this contest, Smile! "NICE PERSON" Sincere, Agape, Moses

Jared Pickett

March 3, 2010 at 9:18 AM

Nice haiku my friend.... Keep em comin'.... So, do you have the inspiration to attempt my Mirrored Refrain???? I would love to see my friends try this rather difficult form.....:JP]

Caryl Muzzey

February 21, 2010 at 5:22 PM

Congratulations on placing in the contest, a wonderful Haiku. Caryl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 20, 2010 at 8:10 PM

Congrats Sara on your winning poem in Raul's recent contest.. a wonderful Haiku and a well deserved win from a wonderful poetess.. enjoy ..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Danny Nunn

February 20, 2010 at 6:59 PM

Sunrise, best time in the world for a hot cup of coffee and this is a good write...Thanks on Power In The Blood..in The Bible Lev. 17.5, tells us not to eat or drink blood,,there is the answer? Tomorrow Part II of Cold Case..thanks Danny

Margaret Foster

February 20, 2010 at 5:45 PM

Well done Sara, this is a lovely picture of early morning...Margaret

Jimmy Anderson

February 20, 2010 at 5:36 PM

Hey Sara, congratulations on your win in Raul's contest. ...Jimmy

Andrea Dietrich

February 20, 2010 at 5:25 PM

wow, I love that line, aurora hidden away! congrats on your win , Sara!

Carrie Richards

February 20, 2010 at 4:30 PM

Lovely poem, Sara! Congratulations on placing in the contest! ~ Carrie

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 20, 2010 at 2:14 PM

Congratulations on your win in Raul Moreno's (Awaiting Dawn Contest) Sara. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno

February 20, 2010 at 1:15 PM

Sara, Congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul

Cecil Hickman

February 20, 2010 at 12:49 PM

a serene and beautiful Haiku,if for the contest I wish you the best and I want to Thank you for the comments you have left for my eyes to see,,, also I am sorry it has taken me so long to return to read yours,,Blessings..Cecil

James Fraser

February 20, 2010 at 6:47 AM

Sara, this is a wonderful Haiku, lovely images it gives out >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 20, 2010 at 6:10 AM

We have sunshine and 40 degrees today ..at the crack of dawn.. this is a beautiful entry for the contest ..if so..good luck in Awaiting Dawn.. my entry is alba di attesa (Italian translation for Awaiting Dawn).. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Lynette Chachere

February 20, 2010 at 2:44 AM

Beautiful. i think its unique how you put all of these words together. -Always&Forever Lynette

David Byrne

February 19, 2010 at 7:53 PM

Like a painting....................

Barbara Gorelick

February 19, 2010 at 7:35 PM

Great last line.I hope you entered this in th contest, because it is wonderful. BG

Edward Ford

February 19, 2010 at 6:57 PM

Very nice one Sara, beautiful mental images this one conjures, I assume that you habitat in the northern latitudes if this writing is from what you see upon waking, well written = )

Charmaine Chircop

February 19, 2010 at 5:04 PM

I was thinking of writing a poem named'Aurora',dear friend,but i didnt.. and you used the word..in a most elegant Haiku..beautiful,just that first blush of clouds makes me think,,this should be in Raul's contest..Charma:)