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Crack of Dawn

Commencement of day
Aurora hidden away
Onset first blush...clouds

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/8/2010 4:07:00 PM

congrats on the win in the contest!!

John Freeman

Date: 3/8/2010 6:58:00 AM

Congratulations Sara in your success in this contest, Smile! "NICE PERSON" Sincere, Agape, Moses

Jared Pickett

Date: 3/3/2010 9:18:00 AM

Nice haiku my friend.... Keep em comin'.... So, do you have the inspiration to attempt my Mirrored Refrain???? I would love to see my friends try this rather difficult form.....:JP]

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 2/21/2010 5:22:00 PM

Congratulations on placing in the contest, a wonderful Haiku. Caryl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/20/2010 8:10:00 PM

Congrats Sara on your winning poem in Raul's recent contest.. a wonderful Haiku and a well deserved win from a wonderful poetess.. enjoy ..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Danny Nunn

Date: 2/20/2010 6:59:00 PM

Sunrise, best time in the world for a hot cup of coffee and this is a good write...Thanks on Power In The Blood..in The Bible Lev. 17.5, tells us not to eat or drink blood,,there is the answer? Tomorrow Part II of Cold Case..thanks Danny

Margaret Foster

Date: 2/20/2010 5:45:00 PM

Well done Sara, this is a lovely picture of early morning...Margaret

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 2/20/2010 5:36:00 PM

Hey Sara, congratulations on your win in Raul's contest. ...Jimmy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2010 5:25:00 PM

wow, I love that line, aurora hidden away! congrats on your win , Sara!

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/20/2010 4:30:00 PM

Lovely poem, Sara! Congratulations on placing in the contest! ~ Carrie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/20/2010 2:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Raul Moreno's (Awaiting Dawn Contest) Sara. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/20/2010 1:15:00 PM

Sara, Congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul

Cecil Hickman

Date: 2/20/2010 12:49:00 PM

a serene and beautiful Haiku,if for the contest I wish you the best and I want to Thank you for the comments you have left for my eyes to see,,, also I am sorry it has taken me so long to return to read yours,,Blessings..Cecil

James Fraser

Date: 2/20/2010 6:47:00 AM

Sara, this is a wonderful Haiku, lovely images it gives out >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/20/2010 6:10:00 AM

We have sunshine and 40 degrees today ..at the crack of dawn.. this is a beautiful entry for the contest ..if so..good luck in Awaiting Dawn.. my entry is alba di attesa (Italian translation for Awaiting Dawn).. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Lynette Chachere

Date: 2/20/2010 2:44:00 AM

Beautiful. i think its unique how you put all of these words together. -Always&Forever Lynette

David Byrne

Date: 2/19/2010 7:53:00 PM

Like a painting....................

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 2/19/2010 7:35:00 PM

Great last line.I hope you entered this in th contest, because it is wonderful. BG

Edward Ford

Date: 2/19/2010 6:57:00 PM

Very nice one Sara, beautiful mental images this one conjures, I assume that you habitat in the northern latitudes if this writing is from what you see upon waking, well written = )

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/19/2010 5:04:00 PM

I was thinking of writing a poem named'Aurora',dear friend,but i didnt.. and you used the word..in a most elegant Haiku..beautiful,just that first blush of clouds makes me think,,this should be in Raul's contest..Charma:)