John Fenn Poet Light Verse

Crabby

When wrinkles start appearing 
Getting deeper by the day
With liver spots accruing
And the hair is going grey 
The early morning aches and pains
A stomach growing flabby
The crows feet and the flatulence
No wonder you feel crabby

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Kim Merryman November 25, 2011 at 8:39 PM Haha! Cute, John. congrats on your placement in the contest. Kim

Joyce Johnson November 24, 2011 at 8:29 AM Cute and very real. Congratulations John

Poet Destroyer A November 24, 2011 at 12:19 AM JOHN, ;-) stopping by to wish you and everyone a happy THANKSGIVING! AND CONGRATULATIONS IN THE contest`" Have yourself a wonderful and lovely holiday. God Bless,.. p.d.

Robert A. Dufresne November 23, 2011 at 5:56 PM sheesh thought you were looking in my mirror at me this morning! Cool poem. Congratulations to you John.

Carol Sunshine Brown November 23, 2011 at 12:36 PM Congratulations on your win in this contest today John W. Love, Carol

Bob Quigley November 23, 2011 at 9:49 AM Been there. Done that. I think of these things as my insignia of rank. I must be getting close to being a general

Ilene Bauer October 3, 2011 at 7:38 PM ha! clever and very amusing. too bad it's also very true!

Carol Sunshine Brown August 26, 2011 at 2:07 PM I have enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today John W. I love poetry that is written from the heart as I believe that is where the best poetry comes from. I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with Love, Good Health and loads of Inspiration. Love, Carol

Nancy Jones August 26, 2011 at 4:15 AM burp :)

Emma Mantle August 26, 2011 at 4:00 AM LOL! Thanks for making me smile this morning with this witty write! Best wishes Em :)