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Come on, man, stop looking at the clouds! Don’t you know that the grey skies almost never scream and shout? Avoid listen to your heart that only wants trouble and pain And once again, don’t underestimate the ones that try to clean up after your stains If the rhyme collects my emotions, simplicity and sense I’ll tell her that I carry a bag of spoken words transformed into sorrows for my defense I would rather stop thinking at all instead of stopping my feelings for being afraid to fall So dont worry, Danny Boy, the death rows, drinks and women are still there But at this point Do you think you still care?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/9/2014 1:55:00 PM
You carry a bag of spoken words..... really they are many but they make so much of sense.... and for you, i think its their reverence..... there is a flow in your poetry and reader flows with it... -- akash
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Date: 1/17/2014 12:06:00 AM
Hi Andressa - beautiful poem. I love the images the poem project. I like what you said about stop thinking - many would sooner suppress their feelings even though they're living a lie. It's better to feel than to become emotionally dead. Very well written. I would like to extend my hand in welcome to the PoetrySoup community. Feel free to check out my poems when you can. I am looking forward to reading more from you. Vicky.
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