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Covetousness

Longing to possess belongings of fellowman. Perfidious unseen want enrobed in sweetness. Treachery rooted deep down. Stealing begins in the heart. One of The Seven Deadly Sins ' Poetry Contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh October 16, 2018 (Matthew 15:19)

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Date: 11/11/2018 1:52:00 PM
Well penned, Susan. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 11/8/2018 4:43:00 PM
what an impactful last line... congrats on your fine win, susan!
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Susan Palli
Date: 11/9/2018 12:56:00 AM
Thanks, Nette!
Date: 11/7/2018 3:10:00 PM
Yes, so true!! The eyes and hands really do follow the heart! Well-penned. Congrats on your win in the contest. Best wishes, Gershon
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Susan Palli
Date: 11/9/2018 12:55:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon!
Date: 11/7/2018 9:47:00 AM
Well done Sis, congrats on a fine win!
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Susan Palli
Date: 11/7/2018 12:47:00 PM
Thanks, John!
Date: 11/6/2018 8:41:00 PM
This is beautifully done. Your last three lines are devastating. Congratulations on your winning placement in the contest. Well deserved. My best. Deb
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Susan Palli
Date: 11/7/2018 12:49:00 PM
Thanks, Deb. Congrats to you too!
Date: 11/6/2018 4:12:00 PM
Thanks for participating in my contest, Susan!:-) Wonderfully done! Congratulations on your top win!
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Susan Palli
Date: 11/7/2018 12:50:00 PM
Thank you, Edward, for hosting this contest. I enjoyed reading all the poems. Great idea!
Date: 10/24/2018 4:04:00 PM
Love this, the last line is superb..
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Susan Palli
Date: 10/25/2018 2:56:00 PM
Thanks, Harry.
Date: 10/16/2018 4:30:00 PM
amen: concisely, truthfully, gracefully said. Shalom shalom!
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Susan Palli
Date: 10/25/2018 2:55:00 PM
Thanks, Anil!

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