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Covetousness

Longing to possess belongings of fellowman. Perfidious unseen want enrobed in sweetness. Treachery rooted deep down. Stealing begins in the heart. One of The Seven Deadly Sins ' Poetry Contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh October 16, 2018 (Matthew 15:19)

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/11/2018 1:52:00 PM

Well penned, Susan. Congrats on your top win.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/8/2018 4:43:00 PM

what an impactful last line... congrats on your fine win, susan!

Susan Palli
Date: 11/9/2018 12:56:00 AM

Thanks, Nette!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/7/2018 3:10:00 PM

Yes, so true!! The eyes and hands really do follow the heart! Well-penned. Congrats on your win in the contest. Best wishes, Gershon

Susan Palli
Date: 11/9/2018 12:55:00 AM

Thank you, Gershon!

John Hamilton

Date: 11/7/2018 9:47:00 AM

Well done Sis, congrats on a fine win!

Susan Palli
Date: 11/7/2018 12:47:00 PM

Thanks, John!

Deb Radke

Date: 11/6/2018 8:41:00 PM

This is beautifully done. Your last three lines are devastating. Congratulations on your winning placement in the contest. Well deserved. My best. Deb

Susan Palli
Date: 11/7/2018 12:49:00 PM

Thanks, Deb. Congrats to you too!