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Covered Within You

Covered Within You



                         Covered by your grace, lost within your soul...

                                     I am whole...
                                         When I'm with you...

                         Concealed by your breath, in your vapors I vanish...

                                     I am here...
                                          Always right here...

                         Collected by your thoughts, forgotten not...

                                     I am alive...
                                          Thanks to you...

                         Captured by your charm, spellbound I follow...

                                     I am yours...
                                          Forever yours...

                         Cultivated in your love, I thirst for your water...

                                     I am fulfilled...
                                          Drinking you up...

                         Connected by your stars, the galaxy is ours...

                                     I am shining...
                                          Brighter for you...




                     Submitted into contest: "Free Verse on Love III"
                         Hosted by: Laura Loo/Revised 10/28/17

                   WON 1st PLACE IN CONTEST RESULTS

Copyright © Brian Davey | Year Posted 2016

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Isor Chand Date: 11/1/2017 12:43:00 PM Well deserved poem to win every heart as well.. Login to Reply Brian Davey Date: 11/1/2017 2:23:00 PM Maybe not everyone but it helps more than it hurts

John Hamilton Date: 11/1/2017 10:36:00 AM Wonderfully romantic, worthy of your first place win! Login to Reply Brian Davey Date: 11/1/2017 2:22:00 PM Thank you John that is great to hear from you

L. J. Carber Date: 11/1/2017 7:48:00 AM A powerful rendering of the transforming power of love-- congrats! Login to Reply Brian Davey Date: 11/1/2017 8:33:00 AM Thank you so much for the kind words

Beautiful Scars Date: 11/1/2017 7:03:00 AM so beautifully romantic Brian, loved the layout too! Thank you and congrats :) Login to Reply Brian Davey Date: 11/1/2017 8:31:00 AM Thank you so much I am so happy that you liked it especially enough to place first! I appreciate you

Deepak Chalise Date: 5/7/2016 2:30:00 PM Very sweet poem,written with determination. Login to Reply Brian Davey Date: 5/8/2016 1:06:00 AM Thank you so much I appreciate your kind words

Skat A Date: 5/7/2016 8:15:00 AM Brian, lovely write... a blessing poem to read this morning. SKAT Login to Reply Brian Davey Date: 5/8/2016 1:05:00 AM Thank you Skat I am happy you enjoyed it, have a great evening

Karam Misra Date: 5/6/2016 4:16:00 AM As Sun Woods commented - mellifluous! There's no need to look for form or style here - there's a lot of heart here. Good job, Brian! Login to Reply Brian Davey Date: 5/6/2016 8:25:00 PM Thank you so much I am ecstatic from your comment!