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Covered Within You

Covered Within You Covered by your grace, lost within your soul... I am whole... When I'm with you... Concealed by your breath, in your vapors I vanish... I am here... Always right here... Collected by your thoughts, forgotten not... I am alive... Thanks to you... Captured by your charm, spellbound I follow... I am yours... Forever yours... Cultivated in your love, I thirst for your water... I am fulfilled... Drinking you up... Connected by your stars, the galaxy is ours... I am shining... Brighter for you... Submitted into contest: "Free Verse on Love III" Hosted by: Laura Loo/Revised 10/28/17 WON 1st PLACE IN CONTEST RESULTS

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Isor Chand
Date: 11/1/2017 12:43:00 PM
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Well deserved poem to win every heart as well..
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Brian Davey
Date: 11/1/2017 2:23:00 PM
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Maybe not everyone but it helps more than it hurts
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John Hamilton
Date: 11/1/2017 10:36:00 AM
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Wonderfully romantic, worthy of your first place win!
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Brian Davey
Date: 11/1/2017 2:22:00 PM
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Thank you John that is great to hear from you
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L. J. Carber
Date: 11/1/2017 7:48:00 AM
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A powerful rendering of the transforming power of love-- congrats!
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Brian Davey
Date: 11/1/2017 8:33:00 AM
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Thank you so much for the kind words
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/1/2017 7:03:00 AM
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so beautifully romantic Brian, loved the layout too! Thank you and congrats :)
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Brian Davey
Date: 11/1/2017 8:31:00 AM
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Thank you so much I am so happy that you liked it especially enough to place first! I appreciate you
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Deepak Chalise
Date: 5/7/2016 2:30:00 PM
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Very sweet poem,written with determination.
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/8/2016 1:06:00 AM
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Thank you so much I appreciate your kind words
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Skat A
Date: 5/7/2016 8:15:00 AM
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Brian, lovely write... a blessing poem to read this morning. SKAT
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/8/2016 1:05:00 AM
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Thank you Skat I am happy you enjoyed it, have a great evening
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Karam Misra
Date: 5/6/2016 4:16:00 AM
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As Sun Woods commented - mellifluous! There's no need to look for form or style here - there's a lot of heart here. Good job, Brian!
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/6/2016 8:25:00 PM
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Thank you so much I am ecstatic from your comment!

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