Cousin Tallie

My cousin Tallie
was a real-life
award winning
beauty queen
from age six to eighteen

The kind who seems
a cardboard cut-out
Southern stereotype
all big hair and hype
manicured nails and
well arranged...
assets
but in reality
there was much more to Tallie

Her favorite movie
was Fried Green Tomatoes
and as far as movies go
it was good
but I never understood
until much later
why she loved it so

At first I thought
she was obsessed with the dish
she just 'had to try' fried green tomatoes
with fried catfish...
But it was actually
more about “Towanda!”
the primal, female battle-cry
 
And there was something electrifying
heartbreaking and mystifying
in the way she had the nerve to
let loose
a hullabaloo
screaming “Towanda!”
without reserve
fully, freely
like a woman
on the very edge
with nothing left to lose
and that was true

Tallie'd been abused
but somehow
nobody chose to see that part
that she actually had
had a heart
that someone had torn apart
Now Tallie's a badass
with blue-green hair
and a hard edged manner
devil-may-care
she has a tattoo
for each person she held dear
far and near
dead and gone
and no one knows why
she's evasive, withdrawn
as they spew out their judgments
in-between their
slow Southern
matter-of-fact yawns

With all the details noticed
while picking her to pieces
how did they miss the moment
her innocence was taken
faith in mankind shaken
How the barefoot, crazy-haired Tallie
running free, suddenly
stopped entirely, sparkle gone
certain sadness in dark eyes
and full-grown
this woman appeared
world-wise

And while they wonder
who the father of her
latest offspring could be
I wonder where the
adorably incorrigible
little Tallie is-
that used to be

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 2/24/2019 3:06:00 PM
wow, Rhona. This is AMAZING writing about Tallie. I love how you spinkled in little things about the south. YOu live down there? And I saw that movie but do not remember the battle cry thing. Anyway, I am so glad Caren reeled you in here!! FAVE poem.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 2/24/2019 8:21:00 PM
Thank you so much!! ;) I used to live in the South... but am trying to pass myself off as a Midwesterner these days. It works great- until I open my mouth (then the drawl gives me away)! hahaha ;D Glad you enjoyed this, you should watch the movie again, though... The "towanda" part in the parking lot is hilarious! https://ffilms.org/fried-green-tomatoes-1991/
Date: 10/6/2018 8:10:00 PM
What a great tribute to your cousin Tallie, Rhona, people can sure destroy lives..I loved the move Green Fried Tomatoes,
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 10/6/2018 8:40:00 PM
Thank you!! Yes, I loved that movie, too. ;)
Date: 10/4/2018 2:47:00 AM
Nicely done...
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 10/4/2018 10:13:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 10/3/2018 9:41:00 PM
Beautiful write, my friend, full of philosophical good sense, and empathetic know-how. I run into cousin Tallies in my line of work, and you have explained in a terrific way how people miss the signs, and yet, are condescending, and all-knowing without knowing anything. TOWANDA! I yell in happy admiration and love to you for penning this terrific poem.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 10/3/2018 10:59:00 PM
Thank you, friend- and TOWANDA! to you, too! ;D
Date: 10/3/2018 7:46:00 PM
Wow - what an awesome account of fabulous intertwined images. A FAVE for me, Rhona. Superbly penned.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 10/3/2018 8:30:00 PM
Thank you, Line! I am honored that you enjoyed it so!
Date: 10/3/2018 3:05:00 PM
a fearless write about a person; daring and beautifully essayed... much enjoyed, rhona...huggs
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 10/3/2018 3:17:00 PM
Although the basis of this is true, (due to the subject matter) I actually chose to create a mash-up of several women I've known- and named her Cousin Tallie. Thank you for the visit & lovely compliments! Hugs!
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