Courtship

Can’t get you out of my head Oh pretty woman Under the moon of love Reach out I’ll be there Temptation Sometimes when we touch Hopelessly devoted to you It must be love Perfect day 10~05~14 Contest: Romantic Acrostic (created using song titles) Sponsor: Regina Riddle ~awarded 1st place~

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Faye Gibson

Date: 10/9/2014 6:39:00 PM

Well done...loved your structure for this piece. Congratulations.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2014 6:40:00 PM

Thanks Faye:-) hugs jan xxx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/9/2014 6:24:00 AM

A real romantic write, congrats on the win, Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2014 7:54:00 AM

Many thanks Dr Mehta:-) hugs jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 10/9/2014 3:56:00 AM

sweet JAn Congrats.. :D!!!!! high five.. :D !!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2014 4:02:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment:-) high 5 and hugs back:-) Jan xxxx

Joseph May

Date: 10/8/2014 10:17:00 PM

Congrats on your win Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2014 4:02:00 AM

Many thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Hija De La Luna

Date: 10/8/2014 10:08:00 PM

lovely, Jan! Congratulations!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2014 4:01:00 AM

Thanks Hija:-) hugs Jan xxx

David Mohn

Date: 10/8/2014 9:02:00 PM

Congrats to you Jan...love the song titles

Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2014 4:01:00 AM

Thanks David I was delighted to do so well:-) hugs jan xx

Abdul Malik

Date: 10/8/2014 6:51:00 PM

You did pretty good there. Congrats.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/8/2014 6:55:00 PM

Can't get better than 1st LOl:-) hugs jan xxx

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/8/2014 5:41:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 10/8/2014 6:01:00 PM

Many thanks Joyce:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Paul Callus

Date: 10/8/2014 3:50:00 PM

Well done Jan! Very unique and creative take on this theme. This is a very merited first place...congratulations. // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 10/8/2014 3:55:00 PM

Thanks Paul I am surprised and delighted with my win:-) Hugs jan xxx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2014 3:44:00 PM

way to go, my friend. BIG congrats to you.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/8/2014 3:48:00 PM

Thanks so much Andrea:-) hugs jan xx

Earl Schumacker

Date: 10/8/2014 12:41:00 PM

Hi Jan, How romantic! An enchanting and charming #1 spot too. Congratulations. Take care. Earl

Jan Allison
Date: 10/8/2014 2:20:00 PM

Thanks so much earl:-) Hugs jan xxx

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/8/2014 11:55:00 AM

I knew this was up to par! Congratulations on your first place win Jan. One of my all time favourites, it just screams romance, is Sometimes when we Touch. The song brings a certain name to mind and makes me smile. You know, that naughty oh ya grin.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/8/2014 2:20:00 PM

Dan Hill - I adore that song too - I wanna hold you till I die till we both break down and cry ... oh what lyrics - am getting all emotional now:-( hugs Jan xxx

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/8/2014 11:14:00 AM

Jan, such a lovely poem! Congratulations on your 1st place win! Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 10/8/2014 2:18:00 PM

Thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/8/2014 11:02:00 AM

This was an amazing write. You deserved your win hands down.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/8/2014 2:18:00 PM

Thanks Maurice:-) hugs Jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/8/2014 11:01:00 AM

Congratulations Jan on a huge win. I think you should buy a lottery ticket today. Wins seem to be rolling your way.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/8/2014 2:18:00 PM

Thanks Maurice for all your support - a lottery win could bring the 4 musky tears together one day! hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 10/8/2014 10:54:00 AM

Wow Jan....big congratulations.... Hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 10/8/2014 2:16:00 PM

Thanks so much Tim:-) Hugs Jan xx

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/8/2014 10:45:00 AM

Congratulations and the song titles was a nice approach ~ Love you - prayers, too ~ Gina

Jan Allison
Date: 10/8/2014 2:15:00 PM

Thanks Regina I am delighted you enjoyed my poem and YOU have made my day with a top podium place:-) Hugs jan xxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 10/7/2014 7:33:00 PM

:) nice and nice.. :D i know most of them except the one in letter u.. :D weeeee. :D!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/8/2014 3:18:00 AM

Under the moon of love was by a group called Showaddywaddy they had hits in the 1970's. Hugs jan xxx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/7/2014 2:16:00 PM

Wow! Extraordinary how you managed to use all of these song titles to create the perfect acrostic for Regina's contest. No luck needed here, your skill will take you to the top. Love, carolyn

Jan Allison
Date: 10/7/2014 2:24:00 PM

I've seen some incredible entries for the contest Carolyn, i just write and hope for the best:-) thanks for the lovely comment. Hugs jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/5/2014 12:49:00 PM

THE ORIGINAL POEM CAN NOW CONTINUE.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/5/2014 12:50:00 PM

:-) thanks hugs Jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/5/2014 12:33:00 PM

Sorry Jan to interrupt your AMAZING POEM. I have just put up a revised version of my poem of the day poem. Can you read it and tell me if I made a mistake and should I put back the original.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/5/2014 12:36:00 PM

Will do:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/5/2014 12:30:00 PM

WE INTERUPT THIS POEM FOR AN IMPORTANT MESSAGE FROM OUR SPONSORS.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/5/2014 12:32:00 PM

LOL Maurice... I am all ears:-) hugs jan xxx

Frederic Parker

Date: 10/5/2014 11:34:00 AM

Anyone who listens to the Tempations will get my attention of Just my imagination

Jan Allison
Date: 10/5/2014 11:46:00 AM

There are so many wonderful song titles to choose from Frederic but getting ones that make up a bit of a story - that's the hard bit:-) thanks for the lovely comment. Hugs Jan xxx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/5/2014 11:11:00 AM

ohh, you brought this piece to a different level, jan... i like the 'perfect' as a clincher.. huggs

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/5/2014 2:27:00 AM

Superb in every way, Jan. You are a poetess in command of the trade!!! I'm so impressed with this sweet piece.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/5/2014 4:23:00 AM

Thanks so much Eileen :-) Hugs jan xxx