Courtship

Can’t get you out of my head
Oh pretty woman
Under the moon of love
Reach out I’ll be there
Temptation
Sometimes when we touch
Hopelessly devoted to you
It must be love
Perfect day

10~05~14
Contest: Romantic Acrostic (created using song titles) 
Sponsor: Regina Riddle
~awarded 1st place~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gibson Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 6:39 PM
Well done...loved your structure for this piece. Congratulations.
Allison Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 6:40 PM
Thanks Faye:-) hugs jan xxx
Mehta Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 6:24 AM
A real romantic write, congrats on the win, Jan
Allison Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 7:54 AM
Many thanks Dr Mehta:-) hugs jan xx
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 3:56 AM
sweet JAn Congrats.. :D!!!!! high five.. :D !!!!
Allison Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 4:02 AM
Thanks for the lovely comment:-) high 5 and hugs back:-) Jan xxxx
May Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 10:17 PM
Congrats on your win Jan
Allison Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 4:02 AM
Many thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
De La Luna Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 10:08 PM
lovely, Jan! Congratulations!
Allison Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 4:01 AM
Thanks Hija:-) hugs Jan xxx
Mohn Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 9:02 PM
Congrats to you Jan...love the song titles
Allison Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 4:01 AM
Thanks David I was delighted to do so well:-) hugs jan xx
Mandani Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 6:51 PM
You did pretty good there. Congrats.
Allison Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 6:55 PM
Can't get better than 1st LOl:-) hugs jan xxx
Johnson Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 5:41 PM
Congratulations on your win, Jan
Allison Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 6:01 PM
Many thanks Joyce:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Callus Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 3:50 PM
Well done Jan! Very unique and creative take on this theme. This is a very merited first place...congratulations. // paul
Allison Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 3:55 PM
Thanks Paul I am surprised and delighted with my win:-) Hugs jan xxx
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 3:44 PM
way to go, my friend. BIG congrats to you.
Allison Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 3:48 PM
Thanks so much Andrea:-) hugs jan xx
Schumacker Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 12:41 PM
Hi Jan, How romantic! An enchanting and charming #1 spot too. Congratulations. Take care. Earl
Allison Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 2:20 PM
Thanks so much earl:-) Hugs jan xxx
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 11:55 AM
I knew this was up to par! Congratulations on your first place win Jan. One of my all time favourites, it just screams romance, is Sometimes when we Touch. The song brings a certain name to mind and makes me smile. You know, that naughty oh ya grin.
Allison Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 2:20 PM
Dan Hill - I adore that song too - I wanna hold you till I die till we both break down and cry ... oh what lyrics - am getting all emotional now:-( hugs Jan xxx
Haight Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 11:14 AM
Jan, such a lovely poem! Congratulations on your 1st place win! Sandra
Allison Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 2:18 PM
Thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xxx
Yvonne Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 11:02 AM
This was an amazing write. You deserved your win hands down.
Allison Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 2:18 PM
Thanks Maurice:-) hugs Jan xxx
Yvonne Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 11:01 AM
Congratulations Jan on a huge win. I think you should buy a lottery ticket today. Wins seem to be rolling your way.
Allison Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 2:18 PM
Thanks Maurice for all your support - a lottery win could bring the 4 musky tears together one day! hugs Jan xxx
Smith Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 10:54 AM
Wow Jan....big congratulations.... Hugs Tim
Allison Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 2:16 PM
Thanks so much Tim:-) Hugs Jan xx
Mcintosh Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 10:45 AM
Congratulations and the song titles was a nice approach ~ Love you - prayers, too ~ Gina
Allison Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 2:15 PM
Thanks Regina I am delighted you enjoyed my poem and YOU have made my day with a top podium place:-) Hugs jan xxx
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 7:33 PM
:) nice and nice.. :D i know most of them except the one in letter u.. :D weeeee. :D!
Allison Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 3:18 AM
Under the moon of love was by a group called Showaddywaddy they had hits in the 1970's. Hugs jan xxx
Devonshire Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 2:16 PM
Wow! Extraordinary how you managed to use all of these song titles to create the perfect acrostic for Regina's contest. No luck needed here, your skill will take you to the top. Love, carolyn
Allison Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 2:24 PM
I've seen some incredible entries for the contest Carolyn, i just write and hope for the best:-) thanks for the lovely comment. Hugs jan xxx
Yvonne Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 12:49 PM
THE ORIGINAL POEM CAN NOW CONTINUE.
Allison Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 12:50 PM
:-) thanks hugs Jan xxx
Yvonne Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 12:33 PM
Sorry Jan to interrupt your AMAZING POEM. I have just put up a revised version of my poem of the day poem. Can you read it and tell me if I made a mistake and should I put back the original.
Allison Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 12:36 PM
Will do:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Yvonne Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 12:30 PM
WE INTERUPT THIS POEM FOR AN IMPORTANT MESSAGE FROM OUR SPONSORS.
Allison Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 12:32 PM
LOL Maurice... I am all ears:-) hugs jan xxx
Parker Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 11:34 AM
Anyone who listens to the Tempations will get my attention of Just my imagination
Allison Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 11:46 AM
There are so many wonderful song titles to choose from Frederic but getting ones that make up a bit of a story - that's the hard bit:-) thanks for the lovely comment. Hugs Jan xxx
Onclaud Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 11:11 AM
ohh, you brought this piece to a different level, jan... i like the 'perfect' as a clincher.. huggs
Manassian Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 2:27 AM
Superb in every way, Jan. You are a poetess in command of the trade!!! I'm so impressed with this sweet piece.
Allison Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 4:23 AM
Thanks so much Eileen :-) Hugs jan xxx
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