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Charles Messina's One Couple Of Days Contest...23 Oct 25
Couple Of Ark Days --OBD
One couple of days ,Noah brought paired creatures away from storm,
Sailed to far Zambia where wife's shape got deformed
With nothing to frolic, mute and blind romped, amidst highflood's rush,
Animals played good good lovin' in darkened hush...
Babies born by leaps , four blind mice became witnesses in the the Ark
Wife kept her own kiddy bump, stayed dumb, yet how can they embark?
Heaven shocked," on the list,we forgot the procreation supply,
Keep the new flock, mute Noah, did I say go forth and multiply?'
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