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Charles Messina's One Couple Of Days Contest...23 Oct 25

Couple Of Ark Days --OBD

One couple of days ,Noah brought paired creatures away from storm,
Sailed to far Zambia where wife's shape got deformed
With nothing to frolic, mute and blind romped, amidst highflood's rush,
Animals played good good lovin' in darkened hush...

Babies born by leaps ,  four blind mice became witnesses in the the Ark
Wife kept  her own kiddy bump,  stayed dumb, yet how can they embark?
Heaven shocked," on the  list,we forgot the procreation supply,
Keep the new flock,  mute Noah, did I say go forth and multiply?'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Jones Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 7:08 PM
Uniquely written! Engaging and entertaining!
Hind Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 6:44 PM
This is interesting, lol
Goldsmith Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 10:04 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Couple Of Ark Days" write. Great Last Line. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful day writing away..............
Rodrigues Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 6:40 AM
An interesting write, Nette,
Greece Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 1:54 AM
Har, har, fun!! It's a who's who game.
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