Countryside

Border of civilization zone for Nature's rest where pleasure stay weightless

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Rizwana Bhurani

Date: 4/21/2016 1:06:00 AM

Vry true.....nothing pleasant like a country side...lovely write

Funom Makama
Date: 4/22/2016 9:04:00 AM

Thank you so much Rizwana Bhurani

Skat A

Date: 2/1/2016 12:13:00 PM

Funom, love the imagery, Nice haiku. thanks for sharing. ** SKAT **

Funom Makama
Date: 2/3/2016 9:04:00 AM

Thank you so much SKAT A

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/28/2016 11:54:00 AM

- Lovely image, Funmon - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Funom Makama
Date: 2/1/2016 6:48:00 AM

Thank you very much Anne

Duke Beaufort

Date: 1/28/2016 8:00:00 AM

The pleasure is simply in the observation of nature taking its course without too much interference from us interferers. Very interesting write, sir!

Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2016 11:09:00 AM

Thank you so much Duke Beaufort

Paul Callus

Date: 1/25/2016 4:44:00 PM

This is lovely and cleverly written, Funom. May I suggest you change the form to 'verse' since a haiku never exceeds 17 syllables. ~ Regards // paul

Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2016 7:45:00 AM

Thank you very much Paul Callus... I will put your advice into serious consideration

Cona Adams

Date: 1/25/2016 3:02:00 PM

Well written Haiku, Funom. Great imagery.

Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2016 7:44:00 AM

Thank you very much Cona