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Country Setting

A stream, searching its limits, laps the bank. Water falls gently over a small dam. Fish nip at flotsam in usual prank, And find protein at weight less than a gram. All's well and calm in this country setting A whiff of wind shuffles a nearby tree, Yet the shallow banks soon will be letting Gallons of overflow to be set free. Soft water's whispers now shriek in a scream. A precipice grips the liquid off-guard. It spills its mass in a powerful stream Down to twirling whirlpool's cold disregard.

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Date: 8/12/2025 6:50:00 AM
- Great description, Hilda :) - Small things in nature that we don't think much about ... but enjoy when one sees it :) - hugs
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 8/12/2025 8:21:00 AM
~~~~~ Thank you for your comment. I had put this poem aside for a while because I didn't think it had enough movement. I'm glad you understand its nostalgia.

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