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Countless Storms

COUNTLESS STORMS


Countless storms,
Have I braved, my love, throughout my life,
Harsh
Violent
Unbearable
Merciless and even fatal storms, 
Went I up against
But
My ground I stood, yielding not to
Their fury
Thus 
Victorious out of the battles I emerged 
Winning the very trophy-
The only one worth fighting for-
The rainbow of happiness that 
Only 
Your soul Emanates!  


© Demetrios Trifiatis
  01 OCTOBER 2013

Copyright © Demetrios Trifiatis | Year Posted 2013

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/3/2013 9:37:00 PM this is wonderful, and it kind of goes along with my stormy tale you recently read!!! Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 10/4/2013 3:09:00 AM Yes, Andrea, my poem goes along with your story that I recently read, the difference is you talk of a true story like thousand that have taken place around the world and I, use it as a metaphor to express my devotion to my love! Furthermore, I read your story on the third of October and had posted my poem on the first of the month as you have done the only difference is: Greece is ahead by ten hours from where you live! Thank you for visiting! I always enjoy your writing!

Russell Sivey Date: 10/1/2013 4:51:00 PM This is quite a romantic and enjoyable write my friend! I thoroughly loved reading this pleasantly wondrous poem! What a glorious piece, Great Work!! Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 10/3/2013 10:42:00 AM Thank you my dear friend, Russell! I hope you are alright! May God keeps you healthy and happy!

Nette Onclaud Date: 10/1/2013 9:34:00 AM how uplifting this is, demetrious... you have gained much affection through this wonderfully expressed work!..:) huggs Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 10/1/2013 10:01:00 AM Thank you for your visit and your cordial message my dear, Nette! Affection is my middle… name. Ha-ha! My older poems are full of affection but in life there are other topics, as you very well know, that we ought to pay attention when necessary ! Thank you again!

Eileen Manassian Date: 10/1/2013 6:51:00 AM Demetri mou..You made some changes to the ending of this....It is beautiful both ways...Very beautiful. Romance becomes you.... Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 10/1/2013 6:55:00 AM Yes, this is true! Thank you for visiting and for your comment!

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 10/1/2013 6:39:00 AM Many of us go through this kind of storms at different times in our lives and for some reason we come out of them. God is looking out for you. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 10/1/2013 6:44:00 AM Thank you, Lucilla!