Counting Syllables

COUNTING SYLLABLES*

2/2

lacks pace
slow race

bombshell
death knell

3/3

one desire
to retire

wasted brain
down the drain

cobblers last
frozen past

common sense
self defence

rocking beat
happy feet

in the groove
on the move

4/4

an unsure cook
recipe book

5/5

confronting yeti
with palms so sweaty

© Harry J Horsman 2022

*Apologising if stepping on anyone’s toes
If so, get in touch and I will credit the poem
First two forms are footles, invented by Brian Strand.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/4/2023 9:46:00 AM
I like these, Harry. Sometimes these little "doodles" can turn into longer pieces.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/25/2022 3:08:00 PM
Fun ~ Warmest wishes for a wonderful new year to your and your loved ones, Harry !
Login to Reply
Date: 11/20/2022 3:56:00 PM
you should enter this in one of Brian's contests. It is worth a shot, Harry.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/20/2022 8:19:00 AM
LOL Harry. A fun read that left smiles on my face. Thanks you! Alice
Login to Reply
Date: 11/18/2022 9:13:00 AM
Shushhhh...The bunyip might be listening.? Or Or; worse a syllable woke bunyip' Imagine being Schooled by one?
Login to Reply
Date: 11/14/2022 2:17:00 PM
Always fun to read a few Footles, Harry. These were very good ones! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Login to Reply
Date: 11/13/2022 3:34:00 PM
this was sure fun. Keep up with stuff like this, Harryl
Login to Reply
Date: 11/12/2022 8:23:00 PM
3/3 sure does the trick for me, Harry. Rocking beat, happy feet... out of graves, into faves! Thanks, Gershon
Login to Reply
Date: 11/12/2022 7:40:00 PM
Very creative and well done.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/12/2022 4:49:00 AM
Enjoyed these!
Login to Reply
Date: 11/11/2022 4:13:00 AM
Enjoyed your counting. Way to go. I like the one about the Yeti. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 11/10/2022 8:36:00 PM
Enjoyed your way of making alterations to Brian's two syllabled footle ! Excellent dear friend, harry ! Love the one... 'unsure cook, recipe book' !
Login to Reply
Date: 11/9/2022 10:42:00 AM
Your footles make enjoyable reading, Harry. Thanks for sharing.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/9/2022 6:49:00 AM
Harry, you did an excellent job. Out of all of them, "common sense, self defense" is my personal favorite, but I really enjoyed reading them all.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/9/2022 5:24:00 AM
You counted them well to bring forth images in just a few words. Expertly done, Harry.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/9/2022 4:43:00 AM
Very interesting Harry! My favorite is Unsure cook, recipe book, love that!! Happy Wednesday !!!
Login to Reply
Date: 11/9/2022 4:16:00 AM
I love footles, keep walking on happy feet Harry, :)
Login to Reply
Date: 11/9/2022 2:51:00 AM
Harry, this is absolutely awesome!! I loved each and every single one of these, well done! I am going to favorite this one. I can't wait to share it with my husband, he'll get a kick out of this!! :)
Login to Reply
Date: 11/9/2022 1:30:00 AM
I loved all of them. I haven't tried one yet.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/9/2022 1:06:00 AM
Rules for poetry aren't set in stone, nothing wrong with experimenting Harry. I don't think anyone would have cause to complain. Tom
Login to Reply
Date: 11/8/2022 10:31:00 PM
very witty xx
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter