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Counting Gulls

gulls tuck in 
fledglings dream
                       of tomorrow at sea
         emerald sun - 
weeps




20th March 2021


Let's Get Creative Haiku Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 3/24/2021 3:17:00 PM
Kai, congratulations on your win in my challenge Let's Get Creative with Haiku and you did exactly that, I love this excellent non traditional Haiku, well done _Constance
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Date: 3/24/2021 2:52:00 PM
An imaginative Haiku that invites discover at each read. Congratulations. Brian
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Date: 3/24/2021 8:20:00 AM
Beautiful imagery and presentation! Congratulations!
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Date: 3/22/2021 10:11:00 PM
Very expressive and creative. Janis
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/24/2021 3:42:00 AM
Thank you Janis.
Date: 3/22/2021 4:32:00 PM
Such striking imagery Kai, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/24/2021 3:43:00 AM
Thank you Jan. Kind wishes, Kai
Date: 3/22/2021 4:25:00 PM
Kai, congrats on your win with your creative haiku! Blessings, Kim M
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/24/2021 3:48:00 AM
Thank you Kim. I appreciate your comment. Kind wishes, Kai
Date: 3/22/2021 3:08:00 PM
Congratulations, Kai, on your Haiku win; you really deserve it; best wishes, Las
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Date: 3/22/2021 2:12:00 PM
Love the idea of emerald sun! Congrats here.
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Date: 3/22/2021 12:41:00 PM
- Thought I had read and comments this earlier ... anyway ... congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/22/2021 11:42:00 AM
Hi Kai, Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/20/2021 4:21:00 AM
Very original. Good luck.
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