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3 times jesus prayed 2 timing judas scheming ~ 1 time kiss betrayed By David Kavanagh

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/16/2020 6:29:00 PM

this one is really cool too. Love short witty poems like this.

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/17/2020 7:12:00 AM

Thanks again Andrea every so often I have to change down a gear in order to regain momentum for the longer ones, cheers David

Sigrid Ermine

Date: 11/14/2020 5:01:00 PM

How awesome is this here conjuring! Shows your keen skill, David, - your observation sharp, dark, humerous. Outstandingly clever Haiku.

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/15/2020 12:23:00 AM

Thanks Sigrid it started out completely different then morphed itself into this, keep your enemies close, but out of kissing range cheers David