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Count Your Blessings

What went wrong? Why did life runaway? I was only a kid. Why did I have to pay? I know I wasn't perfect. Not always a nice guy. But, others are worse and they seem to get by. I live life slow, now, can't seem to get back in paise. Like life's a big compitision and I'm last in the race. I got in a car wreck, that messed me up bad. But, I could end my depression by counting what I still had. I couldn't talk to communicate, but atleast I could still write. Couldn't walk either, but won that in a fight. Lost alot of friends that were close to me too. Now, I see who was false, and the ones that were true. My body was still intact and at least I could see. Saw and heard many people, alot worse off then me. One thought in my head that made me wanna prance. I must be special. God gave me another chance.

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Date: 11/17/2009 9:45:00 PM
I like the message of this poem. I am sorry you had to endure such a feat.
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Date: 10/3/2009 5:51:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Travis. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/2/2009 3:19:00 PM
Hi, I really enjoyed reading your poem. Keep up the good work!! Donielle S.
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