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Count Your Blessings

Count Your Blessings Count them One by one them I hear this desolation As I look around me Woe so lonely All this population Left to wondering What their lives mean Any meaning Just existing Still we are told To count our blessings One by one them Count your blessings At least you have eyes to see with Limbs to do with A heart to feel with A life to live with Everything to give But still we feel so empty Something missing Any meaning Just existing Fear our only answer to life And greed our only answer To fear And we all could be so happy So very, very happy If we could just turn our hands to helping The pleasure of giving Turn our world to caring This paradise we live in Are we just warring tribes With different colours opposing Religious and short sighted ***** opinions We could all be so very happy Save our children Our happy children But instead we sit and count our blessings One by one them Count your blessings A mouthful of food A sip of water A headache pill An amputated arm A PhD degree An education 200 pounds of overweight Malnutrition Slum shanty cardboard box Second vacation holiday home Feeding our stomachs Feeding our ego’s Romanticising our desperate state Of denial We are drowning In our own Refuse pile We could all be so very happy How we want to be So very happy This world is so wealthy Save our people Save our future Save our planet Save our children If we could just begin with caring Start with sharing The joy of helping The pleasure of giving Proud reward of being We would know then How to count our blessings One by one them Count your blessings Seven billion Seven billion

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Date: 2/13/2009 11:27:00 PM
Colin this is a very interesting and powerful poem that I rather enjoyed - I have had such major blessings in my life that just amaze me each morning I open my eyes and I feel blessed. Wonderful message inside the words of this poem - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/13/2009 2:52:00 AM
I count my blessings every single day. The only way to enlightenement is through struggle - pure and simple. The more one struggles (with purpose!) the higher they will be. blindly counting blessings is futile and amounts to poop. lol love, me
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Date: 2/12/2009 12:58:00 PM
Amazing words, powerful words...you really outdid yourself with this one, Colin...this poem is a mind-blower...so much said, so well said! The contrasts (cardboard shanty vs. 2nd vacation home) ...perfect examples ....what is the matter with mankind, that we can't see the forest for the trees? Excellent writing! ~ Carrie
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Date: 2/12/2009 11:24:00 AM
You put a lot of thought into this Colin and didn't leave anything out. Simple messages are sometimes the hardest to get.
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