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Count Your Blessings

Count Your Blessings



Count them
One by one them

I hear this desolation
As I look around me 
Woe so lonely
All this population
Left to wondering
What their lives mean
Any meaning
Just existing

Still we are told
To count our blessings
One by one them
Count your blessings

At least you have eyes to see with
Limbs to do with
A heart to feel with
A life to live with

Everything to give

But still we feel so empty
Something missing
Any meaning
Just existing

Fear our only answer to life
And greed our only answer
To fear

And we all could be so happy
So very, very happy
If we could just turn our hands to helping
The pleasure of giving
Turn our world to caring
This paradise we live in

Are we just warring tribes
With different colours opposing
Religious and short sighted
***** opinions

We could all be so very happy
Save our children
Our happy children

But instead we sit and count our blessings
One by one them
Count your blessings

A mouthful of food
A sip of water
A headache pill
An amputated arm
A PhD degree
An education
200 pounds of overweight
Malnutrition
Slum shanty cardboard box
Second vacation holiday home
Feeding our stomachs
Feeding our ego’s

Romanticising our desperate state
Of denial
We are drowning
In our own 
Refuse pile

We could all be so very happy
How we want to be
So very happy
This world is so wealthy
Save our people
Save our future
Save our planet
Save our children

If we could just begin with caring
Start with sharing
The joy of helping
The pleasure of giving
Proud reward of being

We would know then
How to count our blessings
One by one them
Count your blessings

Seven billion

Seven billion

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/13/2009 11:27:00 PM
Colin this is a very interesting and powerful poem that I rather enjoyed - I have had such major blessings in my life that just amaze me each morning I open my eyes and I feel blessed. Wonderful message inside the words of this poem - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/13/2009 2:52:00 AM
I count my blessings every single day. The only way to enlightenement is through struggle - pure and simple. The more one struggles (with purpose!) the higher they will be. blindly counting blessings is futile and amounts to poop. lol love, me
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Date: 2/12/2009 12:58:00 PM
Amazing words, powerful words...you really outdid yourself with this one, Colin...this poem is a mind-blower...so much said, so well said! The contrasts (cardboard shanty vs. 2nd vacation home) ...perfect examples ....what is the matter with mankind, that we can't see the forest for the trees? Excellent writing! ~ Carrie
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Date: 2/12/2009 11:24:00 AM
You put a lot of thought into this Colin and didn't leave anything out. Simple messages are sometimes the hardest to get.
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