Notes About The Poem

It's a well known fact that a bureaucrat is, by all accounts, a "creature".
 

Count Pat the Aristocrat

Count Pat was a bald aristocrat
Dreamt of becoming a bureaucrat
He loved riddles and red tape
Leaving folks with mouth agape
Cherishing all games of mouse and cat



AP: 2nd place 2022

Submitted on August 31, 2018 for contest ANY ANIMAL OR CREATURE LIMERICK sponsored by CHARLES MESSINA  -  RANKED 2ND
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kendrick Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 10:21 AM
I have read your humorous short work and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
Gauthier Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 10:45 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Sara.
Moorman Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 7:54 AM
Congrats on your win and on your desire to help others become good poets. I commend you for your endeavor to help budding poets by asking others to join you in this.
Gauthier Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 8:23 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Curtis. So glad you contributed to this very exciting project.
Mcguire Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 3:57 PM
Good Job, nice win!
Gauthier Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 4:06 PM
Thanks, Timothy, for your lovely visit and comment.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 11:51 PM
Congratulations, Line on your win. Fine limerick, indeed.
Gauthier Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 6:10 AM
Thanks, Subimal, Most appreciated.
Dietrich Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 3:47 PM
well, you ended with two animals as well, so it worked out GREAT. Congrats to you, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 4:04 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Andrea.
Hinshaw Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 8:56 AM
Congrats for your win for this witty lim! Thx for your kind comments re my win and best to you - Bob
Gauthier Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 10:30 AM
Thanks, Robert, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Messina Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 11:50 AM
Absolutely true..lol I love this, Line. Well done and congratulations on your win in my contest. Thank you for entering...Charlie
Gauthier Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 2:55 PM
Thanks, Charles. Much appreciated. It was a fun contest.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 6:26 PM
A lovely and cheerful Limerick! I enjoyed reading. The best of luck in the contest Line.. Stay safe and blessed.
Gauthier Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 9:36 PM
Thank you, Besma, for your lovely visit and comment.
Kiser Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 1:51 PM
So true...well penned.
Gauthier Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 9:36 PM
LOL. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, ML.
Krutsinger Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 7:07 PM
Your limerick is lovely, Line. Left me laughing! Luck be with you, my lyrical friend.
Gauthier Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 9:19 PM
Thank you, Caren. Much appreciated.
Faulkner Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 4:07 PM
This is so clever, great rhymes, I'm sure this will do well!
Gauthier Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 5:43 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Michelle. Most appreciated.
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