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All is bright, and I betwixt God and you, the kookaburra is in the willow, and honeyeaters in the honeydew flitter as I lay your breast and pillow. You are my morning and evening star, sweet inveigler to the unpracticed heart - girl, all I need is to be where you are and never know what woe it is to part. So we are in our beguiling sublimed by a divine ordinance or blessing, but visceral love, like a woman’s mind, keep all mortal men eternal guessing. Kid, you mean and are everything to me and I do love the stars in Cotton Tree. Written: September 1997 *Cotton Tree is a little enclave in Maroochydore, Queensland. Our unit was the next directly to the left of the one circled.

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Date: 7/21/2024 10:33:00 AM
Who knew you could be so romantic? Beneath that macho veneer you're just a big, squeezy teddy bear. This is written superbly
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 7/22/2024 1:38:00 AM
Yep, I met the wife there. And yeah, I’m still guessing. If you pull my cord this teddy bear will sing “The Bare Necessities” from The Jungle Book.

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