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Cotton Candy Treat

You’re my cotton candy treat: insubstantial but....oh....so sticky and sweet! Eileen Manassian Ghali Sticky...as in you stick to my soul....people! Get a grip!

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Casarah Nance
Date: 6/10/2014 6:54:00 PM
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Hehe Oh that is great, :) Tasty in more ways than one :)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/6/2014 8:33:00 PM
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Got a grip... now what??? Love Kenny XOXOX
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Skat A
Date: 3/6/2014 11:27:00 AM
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so sweet, so sweet! Hugs* SKAT
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/5/2014 5:45:00 PM
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keep rocking those sunglasses.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/5/2014 5:45:00 PM
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hahahaha. you read my thoughts!!! you know what they say about "dirty minds"
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Robert Pettit
Date: 3/4/2014 8:03:00 PM
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Reminds me of what the vendors sell at the ballparks in the summertime.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/5/2014 8:41:00 AM
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I never really liked cotton candy....I like creamy decadant chocolate cake...BUT...that is filling and good....I couldn't use that metaphor. Cotton candy...wispy and not solid, except for the crystallized sugar in your mouth. Thanks for sharing your memory with me.
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Richard D Seal
Date: 3/4/2014 6:58:00 PM
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Yes the soul requires something with a little more sustenance. Deep in only a single line. Take care, Richard
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/5/2014 8:39:00 AM
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Something with lasting power...Yes, you understand my little line, Mr Seal. Thanks for visiting.
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Paul Callus
Date: 3/4/2014 2:51:00 PM
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I agree with Richard...how could it ever cross your mind...naughty! :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/5/2014 8:38:00 AM
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Well.....I'm lost for words! ;)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/4/2014 8:40:00 AM
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If it was what we were thinking insubstantial would be rather disappointing.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/4/2014 10:09:00 AM
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Some dreams, though sweet, are simply unattainable...Thanks for dropping by, Richard. Always good to receive your thoughts ......

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