Cotton Candy Treat

You’re my cotton candy treat: insubstantial but....oh....so sticky and sweet!

Eileen Manassian Ghali

Sticky...as in you stick to my soul....people! Get a grip!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nance Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 6:54 PM
Hehe Oh that is great, :) Tasty in more ways than one :)
Ellison Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 8:33 PM
Got a grip... now what??? Love Kenny XOXOX
A  Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 11:27 AM
so sweet, so sweet! Hugs* SKAT
Dietrich Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 5:45 PM
keep rocking those sunglasses.
Dietrich Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 5:45 PM
hahahaha. you read my thoughts!!! you know what they say about "dirty minds"
Pettit Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 8:03 PM
Reminds me of what the vendors sell at the ballparks in the summertime.
Manassian Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 8:41 AM
I never really liked cotton candy....I like creamy decadant chocolate cake...BUT...that is filling and good....I couldn't use that metaphor. Cotton candy...wispy and not solid, except for the crystallized sugar in your mouth. Thanks for sharing your memory with me.
Seal Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 6:58 PM
Yes the soul requires something with a little more sustenance. Deep in only a single line. Take care, Richard
Manassian Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 8:39 AM
Something with lasting power...Yes, you understand my little line, Mr Seal. Thanks for visiting.
Callus Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 2:51 PM
I agree with Richard...how could it ever cross your mind...naughty! :)
Manassian Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 8:38 AM
Well.....I'm lost for words! ;)
Lamoureux Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 8:40 AM
If it was what we were thinking insubstantial would be rather disappointing.
Manassian Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 10:09 AM
Some dreams, though sweet, are simply unattainable...Thanks for dropping by, Richard. Always good to receive your thoughts ......
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