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Cosmos Un -Seen

Floating high in deepest space, un-seen by eye, exploding stars breath new life, from gas and rocks a planets birth, that leaves a trail for mankind to annihilate, this planet earth once was blue! Solar flares soar out through space disrupting waves and bending light heat and life, a nucleus that keeps us warm…elementary unconquered, a viking probe spies, breaks barriers seeking signs While black holes devour light; then inside out birthing new stars galaxies stretch out fingers to a dark void; infinity the big bang brought us life and hope from gravity; gravitas. © 15/6/2014 Debbies contest

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Date: 10/7/2015 8:18:00 AM
Hi David, this sums it up, not only are you a clever and brilliant poet. You have your way in teaching through poetry. Always a joy to read. Sending soup mail. SKAT
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Date: 8/1/2015 12:41:00 PM
Hi David :)! It sure is so nice to hear from you! Thank you for passing by, what can I say, but you sure can be quite eloquent! Thank you as well for saying what you say about my writes-- how are you? I really enjoyed your take on the cosmos here, you sure incorporated a lot of aspects of it here in your sijo, very cool!
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Date: 1/16/2015 10:48:00 AM
everything supreme, till the human element, i love these David,,can't say i know your meaning behind these (well being me i take a guess) but the poetry is there to marvel and in that i'm rapt
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Date: 12/9/2014 7:50:00 AM
95% unseen. But what we can see are fabulous.While black holes devour light; then inside out birthing new stars galaxies stretch out fingers to a dark void; infinity the big bang brought us life and hope from gravity; gravitas. JUST IMAGINE THE WORK OF THE WIZARD...love..rajat
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Date: 7/16/2014 5:24:00 AM
I could stare at the photographs of deep space for hours finding them mesmerizing. It makes one realize just how tiny we really are. I enjoyed your unique poem David. I hope you and yours are well.
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Date: 7/6/2014 7:43:00 AM
Wow what a topic for a poem. Well handled. A great read. Well done with the competition.
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Date: 7/3/2014 10:38:00 PM
Congrats. It was well written. did you have theme of summer love in mind?
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Date: 7/3/2014 9:51:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 7/3/2014 9:37:00 PM
Well done David, nice to see you again....Seren
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Date: 7/3/2014 7:48:00 PM
Wow! I love this wonderful mind vision you take the reader on. I could almost see the BIG BANG, the beginning of our universe.thank you. Blessings.
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Date: 7/3/2014 11:42:00 AM
Wonderful win David... Tex..
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Date: 7/3/2014 9:11:00 AM
Congrats on your win David...
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Date: 7/3/2014 6:26:00 AM
A fine creative write with equally great imagery, David
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Date: 7/2/2014 8:15:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS DAVID.. :)
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Date: 7/2/2014 4:10:00 PM
Hi David, congratulations on a well-deserved fine win! Beautiful, imaginative write with magnificent imagery! Kindest regards.
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Date: 6/30/2014 1:54:00 PM
I do hate to see that annihilation. Great poem.
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Date: 6/30/2014 2:33:00 AM
So glad to be reading your poetry Dave..Hope to read more of you dear friend!!
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Date: 6/29/2014 11:21:00 PM
A Universal poem, so to speak! Loved it!
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Date: 6/29/2014 8:16:00 PM
I love the travel I made with your words..:) wow!
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Date: 6/29/2014 5:22:00 PM
Hi David, AGAIN!!! :) Thank you for the ride, (( floating myself )) Love the cosmos, and everything that makes this world our world... Brilliant write, xox..TEX
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Date: 6/29/2014 5:19:00 PM
Yes, David, Tex will DO :) Linda
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Date: 6/29/2014 8:54:00 AM
Thanks for dropping by, David. I love your searching the evening sky - no end of mystery there. Love, daver
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Date: 6/25/2014 3:52:00 PM
You sure know how to write, David! and Gosh, is this the gravity contest? You have me curious to know which contest . I did not know Debs still had a contest going on. how are things going on the home front for you?
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Date: 6/23/2014 10:57:00 PM
A fine write my friend.. Black holes are doorways into other dimensions where other universes exist. multi-verses...All matter going into a black hole disintegrates yet it reforms in the other dimension, my theory.
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