Cosmos

Cosmos

Celestial existence
Chronometer perfect
Creation God's kudos
Contrary to chaos
Complete universal
Complex mathematics
Cosmos never telos



For cosmos contest
August 23,2016

Written in pleiades form 7 lines 7 syllables per line

creationearthgodhumanityspaceverse

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Gregory Richard Barden

June 23, 2017 at 11:01 PM

Love this John ... one of my favorite subjects, too, (as you know). :-)

John Hamilton

June 24, 2017 at 2:41 PM

Thanks Greg wow you're getting around to a lot of my stuff, thanks a lot.

Joanna Daniel

August 27, 2016 at 12:17 AM

Congratulations on a great topic that deserved top honours:)

John Hamilton

August 27, 2016 at 7:50 AM

Thanks Jo

Paul Callus

August 26, 2016 at 11:22 AM

Congratulations on your high-placed win, John. You chose a unique topic and described it with apparent ease, considering how complex it is! Full marks to you! // paul

John Hamilton

August 26, 2016 at 12:41 PM

Thanks Paul, apparent ease, appearances are deceiving this was a brain buster, thanks for your positive feedback always a pleasure to hear from you!

Teddy Kimathi

August 26, 2016 at 7:56 AM

Congrats John, for your well, deserved top placement in the contest!! ;-)

John Hamilton

August 26, 2016 at 12:42 PM

Thanks Teddy always appreciate your positive feedback!

Afzal Nusker

August 26, 2016 at 5:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, John.

John Hamilton

August 26, 2016 at 6:35 AM

Thanks Afzal

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 26, 2016 at 3:53 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poems, John :) - hugs and :)

John Hamilton

August 26, 2016 at 6:35 AM

Thanks Anne-Lise

Kai Michael Neumann

August 26, 2016 at 3:02 AM

Never telos indeed. Congratulations, Kai

John Hamilton

August 26, 2016 at 6:34 AM

Thanks Kai, nice to hear from you.

Viv Wigley

August 26, 2016 at 12:26 AM

Very clever, John, well done! Regards, Viv

John Hamilton

August 26, 2016 at 6:34 AM

Thanks Viv for stopping by and giving your comment, always a pleasure.

Connie Marcum Wong

August 25, 2016 at 9:15 PM

Back to congratulate you John! I am so pleased to see your poem score so high. It is well deserved! 7 ; )

John Hamilton

August 25, 2016 at 9:38 PM

Thanks Connie

Sandra Haight

August 25, 2016 at 6:26 PM

Hi, John. Love your 'cosmos' theme here! congratulations on your 2nd Place win in the 'Pleiades C' contest! Sandra

John Hamilton

August 25, 2016 at 9:38 PM

Thanks Sandra

Joseph May

August 25, 2016 at 5:26 PM

Congrats on a great win John

John Hamilton

August 25, 2016 at 5:53 PM

Thanks Joseph.

Beautiful Scars

August 25, 2016 at 5:12 PM

John, back with my congrats dear man!! Well deserved :)-luloo

John Hamilton

August 25, 2016 at 5:52 PM

Thanks Laura ditto back to you!

Jan Allison

August 25, 2016 at 4:59 PM

Dropping back with my congrats John - I thought this one would do well for you:-) hugs Jan xx

John Hamilton

August 25, 2016 at 5:52 PM

Thanks Jan

Kim Merryman

August 25, 2016 at 4:43 PM

A cosmic write, John! (Sorry, I couldn't help myself) You did a fantastic job of describing a vast subject in a small amount of words. Congrats on your 2nd place win! Blessings!

John Hamilton

August 25, 2016 at 4:55 PM

Thanks Kim I appreciate it, it was a tough one for sure, but a great contest thanks again!

Agnes Krampe

August 25, 2016 at 4:42 PM

Beautiful. Congrats!

John Hamilton

August 25, 2016 at 4:55 PM

Thanks Agnes

Demetrios Trifiatis

August 25, 2016 at 8:19 AM

Cosmos, my dear friend, John is a term that was used for the first time by Pythagoras the 6th century BC. He wanted to indicate that the universe was an orderly harmonious whole that obeyed the universal laws of cooperation and coexistence thus the idea of Chaos and disorder was not possible! Cosmos therefore was a unity without beginning or end (Telos)! Mathematics for Pythagoras was the constructive blocks of the universe! Well done my friend! Good luck!

John Hamilton

August 25, 2016 at 8:47 AM

Thanks Demetrios, I thought I was on the right track with this one, thanks for the confirmation.

Connie Marcum Wong

August 25, 2016 at 1:52 AM

Your pleiades is excellent John! A little journey to the outter limits and back! Very impressive my friend! 7 : )

John Hamilton

August 25, 2016 at 8:46 AM

Thanks Connie

Beautiful Scars

August 24, 2016 at 10:57 AM

John, this is my favorite that I have read so far...Kim will love this, just like I did! good luck :)-luloo

John Hamilton

August 24, 2016 at 11:09 AM

Thanks Laura!

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 24, 2016 at 8:31 AM

- A great one, John - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Hamilton

August 24, 2016 at 9:26 AM

Thanks Anne- Lise

Daniel Turner

August 24, 2016 at 8:13 AM

I enjoyed your fine poem about space, John. My favorite line is "Chronometer perfect." Good luck!

John Hamilton

August 24, 2016 at 9:26 AM

It boggles my mind how these vast celestial bodies with millions, billions of planets galaxies all in their orbits and they are more accurate than a rolex chronometer, and it all happened by chance? The rolex needs a maker but the universe no? Sorry, I got off on a tangent. Thanks Daniel.

Winged Warrior

August 23, 2016 at 9:39 PM

A cosmic write my friend...best of luck...and god bless...^WW^

John Hamilton

August 23, 2016 at 9:44 PM

Thanks WW it's all Greek to me! Haha

Eileen Manassian

August 23, 2016 at 11:34 AM

Very well written, John. This is a hard form for me to write in. I really loved the choice of words.....especially that last one that is from Greek origin. Good luck in the contest.

John Hamilton

August 23, 2016 at 11:53 AM

Really almost all are Greek references, it's all Greek to me!!haha let's call Demetrios and get the official word. Thanks Eileen love your video series by the way!