Cosmos

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Written on July, 14th 2025 for Robert James Liguori's USPS Stamp contest.

Within the hazy clouds of the cosmos, Amongst the glint of boiling stars and asphyxiating dust, Where phantasmal realms dance with bleak reality, Lie the foundations of new life in the universe’s incubator. Specks of calcium cling to asteroids bound for distant galaxies, While water vapour forms crystals upon comets, Hurling hope toward unknown planets. Birth, death, and rebirth happen within the fractals of a second, All while humanity spills precious blood contemplating existence.

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Robert James Liguori

Date: 7/28/2025 7:16:00 PM

Great job Sara.

Sara Jama
Date: 8/7/2025 12:33:00 PM

Thank you for the placement in your contest.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/27/2025 7:42:00 AM

Power of the universe...well done Sara. Congratulations! :)

Sara Jama
Date: 8/7/2025 12:32:00 PM

Thank you so much.

Bill Baker

Date: 7/14/2025 6:00:00 PM

Powerful thoughts to think upon, in this well-written poem, Sara. It's not all about us, is it? Write On my friend! Bill

Sara Jama
Date: 7/16/2025 11:45:00 AM

Thank you very much. And no it's not all about us in the end.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 7/14/2025 8:57:00 AM

What a powerfully hitting and poetically moving piece this is, dear Sara! The imagery you've painted is so poignant and profound, conveying such vulnerable truths and depth about the cycle of life. I absolutely love your phenomenal wordsmithery here that elevates me to another realm, especially "Birth, death, and rebirth happen within the fractals of a second, All while humanity spills precious blood contemplating existence" Sigh, that speaks a lot! I'm always awestruck by your artistic manner of weaving metaphors and especially, your words here flow together so flawlessly. Brilliant take on the stamp image and a creative poem for the contest! Always a pleasure reading your work. Best wishes and light! A FAVE ~

Sara Jama
Date: 7/16/2025 11:44:00 AM

Thank you so much for the kind words.