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Cosmic Wonder

Through a child’s godly eyes   ladder of comets twirls-- when midnight dims.



Kim Rodrigues' Heavenly Monoku Contest
1/26/2019

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2019

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February 2, 2019 at 6:25 AM

Always a pleasure to return with congratulations, Nette! A deserved top placement! Hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich

February 1, 2019 at 6:19 PM

congrats on your win here. It was brilliant

February 1, 2019 at 4:14 AM

Ah, the after midnight scene. Yes, the skies get a bit more interesting at that moment. More shooting stars. It was the grand show in the age of Athens. Now, it's on a computer screen more or less due to light pollution. But occasionally, we get a glimpse.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

January 31, 2019 at 1:53 PM

Spellbinding! Wonderful win, congratulations Nette, xomo!

January 31, 2019 at 12:28 PM

Great inspirational Monoku, ette. Congratulations on your win. ~`* Eve

Robert L. Hinshaw

January 30, 2019 at 8:13 PM

Congrats, nette, for your top win for this beauty - Bob

January 30, 2019 at 5:27 PM

Hi Nette, I see why you got such a high placement, this is just beautiful! Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

January 30, 2019 at 3:49 PM

I didn't have long to wait: There you are right up there on one of the top rungs of that winner's platform. So nicely done. Best wishes, Gershon

January 30, 2019 at 3:33 PM

A wonder of imagery! Congrats on your win! xo Kim

January 29, 2019 at 10:17 PM

nette, this is gorgeous, perhaps supra-heavenly, if that be possible. I'll be watching for you in the winner's circle! :) gw

January 29, 2019 at 1:03 PM

A monoku made in heaven, Nette, as seen through a child's eyes! Love the ending. Hugs // paul

Swetha Vangaveti

January 28, 2019 at 9:52 PM

"when midnight dims" I loved this one liner. Superb :)

Mystic Rose Rose

January 27, 2019 at 9:03 PM

I always said children see angels far more easier then we do. Heavenly poem Nette, always a delight reading you, Love

Andrea Dietrich

January 27, 2019 at 3:08 PM

ah yes, heavently indeed, Nette.

Constance La France

January 27, 2019 at 12:27 PM

Nette, oh so beautifully penned as only you can do !

January 27, 2019 at 12:20 PM

Lovely, Nette.

January 27, 2019 at 8:30 AM

Children have this gift to see celestial brilliance at night, not the darkness. That is heavenly like your haiku!

January 27, 2019 at 6:33 AM

Lovely monoku nette. Good luck. I've landed. Tom.

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