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Through a child’s godly eyes ladder of comets twirls-- when midnight dims. Kim Rodrigues' Heavenly Monoku Contest 1/26/2019

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Date: 2/2/2019 6:25:00 AM
Always a pleasure to return with congratulations, Nette! A deserved top placement! Hugs // paul
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Date: 2/1/2019 6:19:00 PM
congrats on your win here. It was brilliant
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Date: 2/1/2019 4:14:00 AM
Ah, the after midnight scene. Yes, the skies get a bit more interesting at that moment. More shooting stars. It was the grand show in the age of Athens. Now, it's on a computer screen more or less due to light pollution. But occasionally, we get a glimpse.
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Date: 1/31/2019 1:53:00 PM
Spellbinding! Wonderful win, congratulations Nette, xomo!
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Date: 1/31/2019 12:28:00 PM
Great inspirational Monoku, ette. Congratulations on your win. ~`* Eve
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Date: 1/30/2019 8:13:00 PM
Congrats, nette, for your top win for this beauty - Bob
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Date: 1/30/2019 5:27:00 PM
Hi Nette, I see why you got such a high placement, this is just beautiful! Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/30/2019 3:49:00 PM
I didn't have long to wait: There you are right up there on one of the top rungs of that winner's platform. So nicely done. Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 1/30/2019 3:33:00 PM
A wonder of imagery! Congrats on your win! xo Kim
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Date: 1/29/2019 10:17:00 PM
nette, this is gorgeous, perhaps supra-heavenly, if that be possible. I'll be watching for you in the winner's circle! :) gw
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Date: 1/29/2019 1:03:00 PM
A monoku made in heaven, Nette, as seen through a child's eyes! Love the ending. Hugs // paul
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Date: 1/28/2019 9:52:00 PM
"when midnight dims" I loved this one liner. Superb :)
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Date: 1/27/2019 9:03:00 PM
I always said children see angels far more easier then we do. Heavenly poem Nette, always a delight reading you, Love
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Date: 1/27/2019 3:08:00 PM
ah yes, heavently indeed, Nette.
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Date: 1/27/2019 12:27:00 PM
Nette, oh so beautifully penned as only you can do !
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Date: 1/27/2019 12:20:00 PM
Lovely, Nette.
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Date: 1/27/2019 8:30:00 AM
Children have this gift to see celestial brilliance at night, not the darkness. That is heavenly like your haiku!
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Date: 1/27/2019 6:33:00 AM
Lovely monoku nette. Good luck. I've landed. Tom.
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