Richard Lamoureux Poet Terzanelle

Cosmic Juggling

The Earth the Moon entranced by the Sun
Moving together in harmony 
Perfectly placed by the only One

I look to the sky and there I see
All the stars like jewels in the night sky
Moving together in harmony

Those who don't believe I wonder Why
So much beauty wherever I look
All the stars like jewels in the night sky

Some things cannot be found in a book
I use my eyes to take in God's show
So much beauty wherever I look

Cosmic juggling sky is a glow
A front row seat my pleasure tonight
I use my eyes to take in God's show

Thankful for this gift I feel delight
A front row seat my pleasure tonight
The Earth the moon entranced by the sun
Perfectly placed by the only One

This poem came to be as a result of Timothy Hicks
Writing a Juggling comment on one of my poems.
So I decided I would turn it into a poem. Thanks Timothy
you never know what will result inspiration.

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Freddie Robinson Jr. November 15, 2016 at 8:07 AM Such a glowing, illuminating poem, Richard. A brilliantly written terzanelle. You are uber talented, but hey you done heard that before, right. Great poem of how we are in awe of God's creations. Love and peace to you.

Richard D Seal March 30, 2013 at 7:59 PM This is really lovely Richard, great theme, great rhyme, very well written indeed. impressive. Take care, Regards Richard Richard Lamoureux March 31, 2013 at 6:46 AM Thanks Richard, a nice compliment from my Name Twin. Have a great day.

Timothy Hicks March 30, 2013 at 5:23 PM So happy to have inspired someone Richard! I love the celestial theme and how you based it all around the Creator... It's a neat thought to think the planet we live on is a Jugglers ball... And amazingly after all this time we haven't dropped... Sorry it took me awhile to read this... Finally got done adjusting to the UK time difference! Richard Lamoureux March 31, 2013 at 6:47 AM I hope you are having the time of your life Timothy. Thanks for taking time out to view my poems.

Russell Sivey March 29, 2013 at 4:01 PM Tremendous! A spectacular write my friend! I am enthralled by the Creator, and this poem brought Him back into the limelight! You are a master of these Terzanelles Richard! I always love getting inspired, there are many things out there that you can get inspiration from, you just have to look at it in that special way! What a terrific piece, a masterful poem, Great Work!! Richard Lamoureux March 29, 2013 at 4:20 PM Thanks Russell I am pleased you enjoyed my poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 29, 2013 at 12:44 PM - This is gorgeous. (We learn and get ideas from each other, that's what is so nice with P-S.) - Happy Easter, Richard. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Richard Lamoureux March 29, 2013 at 12:45 PM Thanks Anne-Lise happy Easter to you as well.

Donna Jones March 29, 2013 at 11:46 AM I also wonder at the questioning? Beautiful poem...perfect! Richard Lamoureux March 29, 2013 at 12:25 PM Thanks Donna

Harry Horsman March 29, 2013 at 10:49 AM wonderful poem which comes together perfectly in the last stanza,, love your front row,, would have loved to have joined you... Richard Lamoureux March 29, 2013 at 12:30 PM I think his theatre is open every night. I would have enjoyed the company, thanks for commenting.

Eileen Manassian March 29, 2013 at 10:17 AM Lovely, Richard. I do love the theme of this and the concept of watching the show by the Master Designer. He is awesome! Good write. Richard Lamoureux March 29, 2013 at 12:31 PM Thanks Eileen, I know you appreciate his handiwork.

Sukmawati Komala March 29, 2013 at 9:40 AM wow.. this is stunning write.. so amazing.. enjoyed much your brilliant talent dear friend poet Richard..<3 :) Sk Richard Lamoureux March 29, 2013 at 12:36 PM What a nice way of saying it. Thanks so much