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Cosmic in Her Gaze

The whirlpool stars of the Milky Way appeared when she was feeling grey. Mother-of-pearl constellations shimmered across her skin in the candlelight. Saturn’s red rings spiraled wildly at her climax— A solar flare unleashed in breathless surrender. Turquoise desire bled into solemn greys, And those greys married verdant dreams, swirling in slow motion. To gaze at her was to weightless drift in a heavenly sky, A vacation from this unforgiving world. Her allure was all-encompassing, enchanted and unique, Spiraling me into a pheromone-induced high Each time she glided by like moonlight on water. She was a celestial mesh of chaos and charm Unreachable, until the universe paused and she murmured, stay.

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Date: 4/30/2025 6:13:00 AM
Dear Billie, So utterly mesmerizing-a POTD dance of longing and wonder. The way you blend starlight, planets, and desire into human emotion is breathtaking, echoing the timeless tradition of poets who use celestial imagery to capture love’s mystery and transcendence. You’ve written a universe-enchanting, luminous, and unforgettable POTD. Congrats! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 4/23/2025 2:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a blessed day...............
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Billie Jama
Date: 4/23/2025 5:23:00 PM
Thank you kindly Paula dear
Date: 4/23/2025 11:19:00 AM
Congratulations my love on POTD. Well deseverd. I'm so proud of you.
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Billie Jama
Date: 4/23/2025 5:22:00 PM
Thank you my Onyx Rose and muse
Date: 4/23/2025 9:37:00 AM
Remarkable personification, methinks, and so creative -- a living, breathing solar flare! Congrats on POTD, Billie Jama, for a poem cosmic in its impact! ~ Gershon
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Billie Jama
Date: 4/23/2025 5:22:00 PM
Thank you kindly
Date: 4/23/2025 4:50:00 AM
...and I've been with her ever since....beautifullly done Billie
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Billie Jama
Date: 4/23/2025 5:21:00 PM
Yes indeed, thank you
Date: 4/23/2025 3:19:00 AM
Billie, so beautifully penned. Congratulations on POTD.
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Billie Jama
Date: 4/23/2025 3:55:00 AM
Thank you kindly. I'm glad that you liked my poem.
Date: 4/23/2025 2:47:00 AM
Love your vivid potd! Congratulations!
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Billie Jama
Date: 4/23/2025 3:55:00 AM
Thanks sis your support is so much appreciated and I'm glad you enjoyed
Date: 4/23/2025 2:43:00 AM
Congratulations sis on receiving POTD! So happy to see your heartfelt poem featured! And thats a pic i love of yours, youv put as profile pic! I can never tell which cat it is as you and sara have too many! Haha i think i know nova! Sending you light always
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Billie Jama
Date: 4/23/2025 3:57:00 AM
Thanks sis your support always means so much to me. Haha yes we do have a lot of cats (4) that's Ginger. Nova is the little black and white cat that Sara brought from America with her. It was Ginger Mr. Pretty's 8th birthday just recently on the 10th. There were my boys originally but they're all our cats now, aren't they?.
Date: 4/23/2025 2:02:00 AM
- What a wonderful poem ... beautiful to read with specially chosen lines, Billie :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ... enjoy :) - hugs
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Billie Jama
Date: 4/23/2025 3:58:00 AM
Thank you ever so kindly. I am overjoyed.
Date: 4/23/2025 1:34:00 AM
Charming! Congratulations on your POTD honor dear poet. Three Cheers!!! Happy writing.
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Billie Jama
Date: 4/23/2025 3:55:00 AM
Thank you so so much it was a pleasure to share and an even greater pleasure to be potd
Date: 4/23/2025 1:13:00 AM
Hello Billie, congratulations on your POTD win with this beautifully written poem. An enjoyable read.
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Billie Jama
Date: 4/23/2025 1:20:00 AM
Thank you dearly. I'm glad you enjoyed and I'm overjoyed at receiving this wonderful honour.
Date: 4/23/2025 1:07:00 AM
Oh, Billie how entrancing to be described in such a beautiful array of accolades. You sing her praises and put her on the pedestal worthy of a goddess. She must be! "Moonlight on water..." that's adulating. Last line exposes the heart in its full emotional glory. Congratulations on having your lines recognized as poem of the day.
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/23/2025 1:29:00 AM
You're welcome... love your new avatar with Ginger in Socks!
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Billie Jama
Date: 4/23/2025 1:11:00 AM
Thank you Line dear. Always it's always an honour to be recognised especially when it's a an ode to my beloved Sara. I will praise her as she deserves to be.
Date: 4/23/2025 12:56:00 AM
Beautiful poetry, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
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Billie Jama
Date: 4/23/2025 1:06:00 AM
Thank you kindly, it's was such a lovely surprise to find out that my little old poem in POTD. I am so honoured
Date: 4/21/2025 12:39:00 PM
This is absolutely breathtakingly beautiful my love. Every line is more gorgeous than the last. Good luck in the contest. It's definitely a winner. I'm always so proud of you.
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Billie Jama
Date: 4/23/2025 1:05:00 AM
Thank you my Onyx Rose, love and muse.
Date: 4/21/2025 7:05:00 AM
Ah this is so beautiful sis, so romantic and passionate and your ethereal wordplay and the way your lines flow so seamlessly is so captivating! I love so many lines in this like "A solar flare unleashed in breathless surrender. Turquoise desire bled into solemn greys," ah so beautiful, and metaphorical! Its only few that can write sensual in such a poetic manner like you do! And ofcourse this is a fave for me but every poem written by you is a fave for me! Sending you light always
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Billie Jama
Date: 4/21/2025 7:15:00 AM
Awe thanks sis, I feel the same about your poems at this point they're all my favourites. Your support is always very appreciated. Sending you love and light

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